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Still reads too much like a brochure

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I did some initial cleanup on the new content added by the curator of the museum, but it still reads too much like a brochure. I suppose this is hard to avoid, coming from its curator. But nevertheless, this is an encyclopedia article, not a sales brochure, so it needs further updates. Stevie is the man! TalkWork 15:36, 11 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

This article has had little attention to it since it's creation. I did a big overhaul to remove its brochure feel. Add an infobox, two references, and reworded a lot. Yet the article still needs some tender loving care. If anyone could help by expanding its references, it would be great. -Jahnx (talk) 07:57, 8 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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This article is marked as Start as it's beyond a stub but it currently reads too much like a brochure. Stevie is the man! TalkWork 14:53, 18 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Last edited at 14:53, 18 December 2006 (UTC). Substituted at 21:07, 29 April 2016 (UTC)

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