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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 19:15, 27 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]


QatarStarsLeague (talk) 19:15, 27 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]


My personal opinion is that the lead sentence should mention the competition the car was built for, rather than any standards it may have fitted for.
"Initial plans to construct a similar Le Mans Prototype car were made in March 2011 by Stéphane Chosse, founder of ADESS." The word similar perhaps is discordant here, as the 2011 envisioned car actually became the T128 itself
"The study of the T128 was undertake..." I think an aerodynamic study should be clarified
"It was developed in the high-technology section of the Bavarian..." Some sort of hi-tec industrial park/facility?
I feel the nationalities of the two companies involved in the inception/production of the car (both German) should be mentioned here or in the lead
James Key should be wikilinked in the infobox, and probably mentioned in the lead
" ADESS engineers used HyperWorks including the HyperMesh tool." What is HyperWorks exactly?
"Weeda, Bouchut (in for Rossiter who was in Japan)" For a different motorsport season or something?
"ADESS and SCE Solutions after the three organisations learn that the team owners Romulus and Colin Kolles are in debt." learned
" Furthermore, the trio's young age and reoccurring engine overheating issues..." Age translating here to lack of skill?
"Choose, ADESS and SCE Solutions" Chosse
"..."a seven-figure amount" of unpaid invoices and filed a complaint with the French court." In invoices, not of

  • @QatarStarsLeague: Have done all the points so far. Do you have any thing else that needs rectifying?
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