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Removing section

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As I've already mentioned to User:Nadavangel on their page, the problems with the long section "Music critiques" (the main part of the article) are far beyond merely sticking on a template. It's completely unreferenced, full of opinion, and full of direct quotes without cites. At one point, there's even a speaking voice in the text, an "I" — "A quote from John Russell, former art critic at the New York Times brought vividly to my mind the music critiques written by Marshall Baron." Sic, right in the article text. Brought to whose mind? Wikipedia's mind..? I'm removing this section. If anybody can make use of the material in it to write a radically new version, you can find it in the History. Or, if you're a new user and don't know your way around histories, please let me know and I'll provide you with the text. I'll be back later to turn the biography table into prose and remove a little undue stuff in it, such as some unsourced praise and the childhood exploits. Bishonen | talk 11:47, 23 February 2015 (UTC).[reply]

A painting that not used

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Turn Right at Greenwich

The article is too short to add anther picture, but commons have one more painting that you can use. If someone will add more information to this article he can add this painting. Turn Right at Greenwich.Nadavangel (talk) 19:47, 6 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]