Talk:Pathrakaliamman Temple

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Rewrite cleanup needed[edit]

This article needs a major overhaul, but I'm not familiar with the subject matter, hence feel unable to tackle this. Firstly, the article is IMO too long, and should be condensed. Other issues include, but may not necessarily be limited to:

There is too much intricate detail such as opening hours etc., which has no place in an encyclopaedia
Terminology/language is used which may be confusing to non-expert readers
The article's tone and writing style should be more 'encyclopaedic', precise and concise, avoiding fluff and commentary
Some subsection headings could be removed, especially from the 'Festivals' section, to avoid the TOC becoming so big
The article is currently un(der)linked, with wikilinks only appearing (AFAICT) in the infobox
There are a number of external links listed as 'References', but they are not used as such, and should be restructured (and replaced, those that are dead)

I didn't want to add half a dozen or more tags, so have only placed the rewrite cleanup one, and instead listed the issues (as I see them) above. Anyone feel energetic enough to take a stab at it? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 13:10, 8 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]