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Cunard: I did some cleanup, added a category, put in headings to make it easier to follow. The article is mostly about his performance in the legislature, which is appropriate for a politician and also what I know about him. Just researched him for something else. I'm not sure what else I should do to "wikify". Ideas welcome.DaveBurstein (talk) 06:15, 22 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

DaveBurstein (talk) 01:36, 10 November 2008 (UTC) Removed massive amount of puffery and opinion that read like it was plucked from a campaign document and replaced it with the specific details of his proposal. Restored factual and well-sourced data on his votes and funding sources.[reply]

It is wildly inappropriate to say "As chair of the Wisconsin Assembly Committee on Energy and Utilities, Representative Montgomery has expanded Wisconsin’s use of renewable energy while also protecting rate payers. [13] [14]" when he has said the number 1 bill in the next session of the Assembly should be his proposal that phone rates to rise.

Wikified I did this before someone reverse this

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I did wikified this article. However, some editor reverse this. It may had been an experiment on this editors's part.I did remove the wikified tag. Thank youRFD (talk) 13:37, 10 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]