Talk:Phil Montgomery

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Cunard: I did some cleanup, added a category, put in headings to make it easier to follow. The article is mostly about his performance in the legislature, which is appropriate for a politician and also what I know about him. Just researched him for something else. I'm not sure what else I should do to "wikify". Ideas welcome.DaveBurstein (talk) 06:15, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

DaveBurstein (talk) 01:36, 10 November 2008 (UTC) Removed massive amount of puffery and opinion that read like it was plucked from a campaign document and replaced it with the specific details of his proposal. Restored factual and well-sourced data on his votes and funding sources.

It is wildly inappropriate to say "As chair of the Wisconsin Assembly Committee on Energy and Utilities, Representative Montgomery has expanded Wisconsin’s use of renewable energy while also protecting rate payers. [13] [14]" when he has said the number 1 bill in the next session of the Assembly should be his proposal that phone rates to rise.

Wikified I did this before someone reverse this[edit]

I did wikified this article. However, some editor reverse this. It may had been an experiment on this editors's part.I did remove the wikified tag. Thank youRFD (talk) 13:37, 10 November 2008 (UTC)