Talk:Reb Anderson

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Controversy[edit]

The controversial incident related in bio was taking up about 75% of the entry. I shortened for more balanced coverage, moved awkward long quote to footnote, and moved bio info from lengthy redundant lead and integrated into bio. I also generally tried to increase readability and improve grammar in all cases, with considerably greater NPOV.Tao2911 (talk) 18:48, 9 July 2010 (UTC)