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If the method of setting up the bibliography list is wrong would someone plese let me know and just point me to a good example - thanks CyntWorkStuff 04:19, 8 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Photo

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The photo on the article, with Robyn Ochs' mouth's open suggestively, seems a little inappropriate for a Wikipedia entry.

209.244.43.231 23:16, 5 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

What?? What do you think it's suggestive of? Nevermind, I don't want to know. But I think someone seeing that photo as "suggestive" reflects more on the viewer, than on the photo. /blahedo (t) 03:32, 6 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

POV/Sources

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Well, she sure does sound an interesting person - but "leading"? No sources to back this or any of the article up. A few good sources from some solid media would help this article greatly. Rgds, - Trident13

um, huh? not sure what thing, section, concept, whatever, is being complained about here, please made objections clearer thnx ---- —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 63.215.27.197 (talk) 14:18, 26 April 2007 (UTC).[reply]
Have just added the first three articles I came across when I "googled" her. Amusingly enough, she really is so well know, that I suppose that no one really thought about the need for lots of extra documentation. CyntWorkStuff 19:06, 5 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]
The problems as I see it are........
  • "long-time" - pov!
  • "noted professional speaker and workshop leader" - noted against what? POV!
  • "appeared as an expert...." and yet not one reference? Without its POV
  • "She has taught courses on topics including...." and not one reference?
  • "...she has spent her life fighting against...." pov AND where are the references?
As I said originally when tagging this article, remove the POV statements and add some references - simple for an expert. Rgds, --Trident13 21:02, 5 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Ah, but what is missing is "the expert"! CyntWorkStuff 21:11, 5 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]
I've revised the article for the previously discussed POV issues. I think the NPOV tag can be removed, but the citation tag should stay. Phyesalis 04:25, 9 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
I have added a reference for the courses she has taught.Sjpurol (talk) 01:43, 26 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

In light of the above I am removeing both the NPOV + Citations tags CyntWorkStuff (talk) 00:29, 27 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

WikiProject class rating

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This article was automatically assessed because at least one WikiProject had rated the article as stub, and the rating on other projects was brought up to Stub class. BetacommandBot 06:39, 10 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Article reads like an ad or blurb from a speaker's bureau

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With absolutely all respect to Ms. Ochs, the article itself sounds like a blurb we might read from a speaker's bureau about Ms. Ochs, or from a book's dust jacket.

Hurray, I can edit this page, the bullying admin Raul hasn't blocked this IP address out yet in his search for teh evil scibabby! The wiki needs fewer bullying admins. 70.1.80.65 (talk) 21:24, 6 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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I removed these external links per WP:ELNO. They may be useful for further reference.

Runawayangel (talk) 23:34, 25 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]