Talk:Ryan Arcidiacono

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Jump to: navigation, search
WikiProject Biography / Sports and Games (Rated GA-class)
WikiProject icon This article is within the scope of WikiProject Biography, a collaborative effort to create, develop and organize Wikipedia's articles about people. All interested editors are invited to join the project and contribute to the discussion. For instructions on how to use this banner, please refer to the documentation.
 GA  This article has been rated as GA-Class on the project's quality scale.
Taskforce icon
This article is supported by the sports and games work group.
 
WikiProject College Basketball (Rated GA-class, Low-importance)
WikiProject icon This article is within the scope of WikiProject College Basketball, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of College Basketball on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.
 GA  This article has been rated as GA-Class on the project's quality scale.
 Low  This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.
 
WikiProject National Basketball Association (Rated GA-class, Low-importance)
WikiProject icon This article is within the scope of WikiProject National Basketball Association, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of the NBA on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.
 GA  This article has been rated as GA-Class on the project's quality scale.
 Low  This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.
 

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Ryan Arcidiacono/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 21:18, 21 July 2014 (UTC)


I'll review this article shortly; it's been waiting too long for one. Wizardman 21:18, 21 July 2014 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:

  • "Ryan Curran Arcidiacono (born March 26, 1994) is an American college basketball player for Villanova where he is a sophomore on the 2013–14 team." Written that way makes it dated. I'd say put his year in the infobox instead but I don't think there's an option for that. End with Villanova for the first sentence, then you can add his current class status later in the lead.
  • "where Joe was offensive lineman on the football team." was an offensive
  • there's a couple spots where I feel like a cite would be helpful (the plastic hoop and the injury/35 points as examples), but I'm presuming cite two is used for those facts, since that's the cite in the following ones. if this is not the case add a cite for them.
  • Make sure ndashes are being used for scores rather than hyphens.
  • " The Redskins reached the state quarterfinals in 2011 before losing to Penn Wood." This is the first time Neshaminy's team name is noted, and it's pretty deep in the section. Maybe use it earlier to make it clearer?

I'll put the article on hold and pass when fixed. Wizardman 22:34, 25 July 2014 (UTC)

I see the main author hasn't been active, so I'll give this another week. Wizardman 16:41, 1 August 2014 (UTC)

Went ahead and made the fixes myself since they were quick; GAN passes. Wizardman 02:04, 4 August 2014 (UTC)