Talk:Son of a Gun (I Betcha Think This Song Is About You)

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Good article Son of a Gun (I Betcha Think This Song Is About You) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
August 11, 2014 Good article nominee Listed

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Son of a Gun (I Betcha Think This Song Is About You)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: My love is love (talk · contribs) 16:01, 8 August 2014 (UTC)


Lead
  • "Son of a Gun (I Betcha Think This Song Is About You)"'s album version - The album version of "Son of a Gun (I Betcha Think This Song Is About You)".
  • becoming her lowest-charting single - Jackson's or Simon's?
  • Link music video.
Background
  • "She rapped, but thought Jackson and the producers would not use it, but they did like it." - A bit informal and confusing. You can re-write it as "She rapped, initially thinking that Jackson and the producers would not use it, but eventually they liked it.
  • to tell her that she loved her music - to reveal her that she admired her work or music.
  • If the remix version also featured P. Diddy why is that not mentioned in the lead nor in the infobox?
Composition
  • a R&B... - an R&B
Critical reception
  • "Son of a Gun (I Betcha Think This Song Is About You)"'s album and remix versions received mixed reviews from... - Change this sentence to Both the album and remix versions of "Son of a Gun (I Betcha Think This Song Is About You)" received mixed reviews from...
  • Change Allmusic to AllMusic.
Chart performance
  • Add some dates of the song's debut and peak positions if such information can be found.
Music video
  • Link music video.
  • Jackson is angry... - This is weird. Try to change it somehow. Maybe use, Jackson is seen looking angry.
  • Link Michael Jackson.

After these are adressed the article will be promoted to GA. I Am... ***D.D. 12:37, 10 August 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for the review. All issues have been addressed, except the Chart performance section, because I'm editing through mobile (because of some problems with my computer) and it would be difficult to find such dates. Alex talk page! 08:26, 11 August 2014 (UTC)
OK. Passed. I Am... ***D.D. 09:47, 11 August 2014 (UTC)