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Good articleSuave (song) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
January 10, 2023Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Suave (song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:24, 4 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will review this per your request, Erick! --K. Peake 08:24, 4 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Shouldn't Larrabee be written as Larrabee Sound in the infobox?
  • "The song was met with positive reactions" → "The song received positive reactions"
  • Move the award-winning sentence to being the one after the above, also place the music video one after the commercial sentence
  • "by Kiko Guerrero, filmed in" → "by Kiko Guerrero and filmed in" since the last and is the only one to not use "was"
  • "Commercially, the track reached" → "Commercially, the song reached"
  • "Rivera's cover was nominated in" → "The cover was nominated in"

Background and composition

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  • "A 27-second sample of Miguel's "Suave"," → "A 27-second sample of "Suave"," on the audio sample text, also change the title to "Suave"
  • First para looks good!
  • Wikilink as cover versions instead
  • Shouldn't you identify the album by name in the second para?
  • The dance genre is not sourced
  • "and its lyrics narrates about a" → "and its lyrics narrate about a"

Promotion and reception

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  • Wouldn't it be more suitable to write that the live version was featured on Miguel's live albums then write the titles?
  • "listed as the best three songs" → "listed it as the best three songs"
  • Wikilink VH1
  • Why is the Notitas Musicales position not mentioned here?
  • Remove pipe on covered

Track listing

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  • Good

Personnel

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Weekly charts

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  • Retitle to Charts

Jerry Rivera version

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • The 1995 recording year is not sourced
  • Wikilink funk
  • "became his first number one song" → "became Rivera's first number one song"

Charts

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  • Good

See also

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  • Good

References

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  • Copyvio score looks respectable at 33.3%!!
  • Wikilink AllMusic on ref 2 instead of ref 3, also remove Rovi Corporation
  • Cite GQ as work/website instead on ref 13 with the wikilink
  • Fix MOS:CAPS issues with ref 18
  • Wikilink Milenio on ref 22
  • Pipe Sony Music España to Sony Music on ref 24
  • Luis Miguel should be author linked on ref 25 instead of ref 26 and format his name in the same way for both to be consistent
  • WP:OVERLINK of AllMusic on ref 28

Final comments and verdict

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