Talk:Tadeusz Szeligowski
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[edit]Phrasing concerns
[edit]Just a note that I have removed this article from the DYK queue. I have some concerns that phrasings used in this article are too close to those used in its sources, particularly this source. For example, "Lvov’s musical scene at that time included a city opera" vs "Lwów’s musical scene included a city opera". See this page for some tips on how to avoid this issue. Nikkimaria (talk) 13:53, 27 August 2011 (UTC)
- A further example of overly-close paraphrasing is "Szeligowski’s first music and piano teacher was his mother", repeated verbatim from the source. Please check that all material is either presented in quotes or completely paraphrased. Nikkimaria (talk) 14:13, 27 August 2011 (UTC)
- How about: Szeligowski’s mother was his first piano teacher ? An article becomes an article Administrator Nikki when another User takes part in its creation. Why didn't you change the "paraphrasing" instead of excluding the article from the queue ? Kind regards, Krenakarore (talk) 17:03, 27 August 2011 (UTC)
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