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Good articleThe Duel (The Office) has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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May 9, 2010Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 22:05, 8 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I only have a few comments, as the article is generally fine. You probably noticed that I did some minor copy editing which you are free to override.

  • How did they duel? A fist fight, or what? (At first I assumed it was with swords.)
  • "During the scene when Andy returns to the office and confronts his co-workers amid long standing silence," - how is silence long standing in this situation?
    • I'm not sure I understand your comment. It's a scene where he goes in and there's a long awkward silence for a long time. I changed the language a bit here too... — Hunter Kahn 23:48, 8 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The Dwight bobblehead doll is a reference to the second season episode "Valentine's Day", in which Angela gave it to Dwight as a gift." - How is a reference to a previous episode a "cultural reference"?
    • I guess it's more self-referential, but other television episodes have included these kind of references. If you don't think it works, feel free to delete it. — Hunter Kahn 23:48, 8 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Xtzou (Talk) 22:05, 8 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality: Good
    B. MoS compliance: Complies with MoS
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources: Reliable sources
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: Yes
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail: Pass!
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