Talk:Todd Bernstein

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Some proposed changes

This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined.

Change numbers in paragraph 2 from: "In 1996, Bernstein started the nation’s first King Day of Service in Philadelphia. The Greater Philadelphia King Day of Service has drawn more than 1.2 million volunteers over twenty years. Each year, it has been the largest King Holiday event in the nation. This past January, 2015, more than 135,000 people volunteered in some 1,800 projects in the 20th annual event.[2][not in citation given][3][not in citation given][4][dead link] In 2012, Vice President Joe Biden and Dr. Jill Biden participated.[5]"

To: "In 1996, Bernstein started the nation’s first King Day of Service in Philadelphia. The Greater Philadelphia King Day of Service has drawn more than 1.3 million volunteers over twenty-one years. Each year, it has been the largest King Holiday event in the nation. This past January, 2016, more than 140,000 people volunteered in some 1,800 projects in the 21st annual event. In 2012, Vice President Joe Biden and Dr. Jill Biden participated."

These edits reflect the data of the most recent Greater Philadelphia King Day of Service.

Sources: ^[1] ^[2] ^[3] ^[4]

References

Gcbird2 (talk) 17:35, 10 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, number two and number four citations for the 'article.philly.com' links above now either do not work or are now needing hunting in archives (page says welcome to archives) so we would need the archived material in citation format to be able to read. As well, number one and three need to be placed inline to link to exactly which statement it is supporting. To me as an editor, trying to match these bare links to your text would involve some WP:Original Research. As well, if this event was held in January 2017, these are still outdated. I have reworded the lead and the second paragraph to remove several flagged citations. There still remains the dead link in the lead. I am going to close this request as being insufficient content and quality to implement. Please feel free to return and open a new request with updates and linked citations. Thanks and wishing you all the best. Fylbecatulous talk 20:38, 4 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Question about disclaimers

Hi there,

I'm reaching out on behalf of Todd Bernstein, my supervisor. He is interested in having the three disclaimers at the top of his page removed. Could someone tell me what--specifically--needs to be changed on his article to make that happen?

Thanks, Campbell Gcbird2 (talk) 17:27, 3 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Please note that each template contains links to the relevant policies and guidelines. In order to have the templates removed, the article must conform to each of those policies and guidelines. Unfortunately, the 3rd template cannot be corrected by you even through the edit requests, as it requires independent input from other editors to the article.

If you are willing to try and improve the article's quality, you should look at the edit request instructions, and propose the edits here. Regards, VB00 (talk) 12:06, 19 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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[1] ttp://6abc.com/society/marking-the-mlk-day-of-service-at-girard-college/1163655/

[2] ttp://articles.philly.com/2016-01-20/news/69904037_1_martin-luther-king-day-girard-college-civil-rights-movement

[3] ttp://thephiladelphiacitizen.org/mlk-day-lets-make-every-day-a-day-of-service-todd-bernstein/

[4] ttp://articles.philly.com/2012-01-17/news/30635481_1_vice-president-biden-volunteers-girard-college

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