Talk:Typhoons Louise and Marge

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Review: December 14, 2020. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 01:04, 9 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Doing. Noah^Talk 01:04, 9 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

reconnaissance aircraft began probing the developing storm USAF I assume... I would also mention the unit involved.

@Hurricane Noah: There is no mention of USAF or any US military unit involved from the source, I consider any addition to be WP:OR.

Not done. SMB9 9thx my edits! 02:43, 14 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

torm.[20][21][22].[23] Extra punctuation

Done SMB9 9thx my edits! 02:43, 14 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

valued in the millions of Philippine pesos I believe it should be "in" instead of "of"

Done SMB9 9thx my edits! 02:43, 14 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Really isn't that much here to correct. Noah^Talk 12:52, 9 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It's finished. SMB9 9thx my edits! 02:43, 14 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]