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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 11:40, 15 November 2013 (UTC)

Blue Bird (train)

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The Blue Bird's "Vista-Dome" dome parlor-observation car in the 1950s.

Created by Mackensen (talk). Self nominated at 21:39, 9 November 2013 (UTC).

  • Created and nominated on November 9, and is over 2800 characters, satisfying length and date criteria. QPQ completed. Text contains quoted material "recorded musical programs" without a citation. The text does not make clear that the cut service was Chicago-Decatur (instead of St. Louis-Decatur, for example). I will assume good faith for the four sources (3,4,6 and 7) I cannot access. I cannot parse the term "lightweight consist" in the given context - what does this mean? Other than that, the article is sourced to reliable references. Once these minor issues are resolved, it'll be good to go. Mindmatrix 21:11, 10 November 2013 (UTC)
  • I've clarified that the train still originated in Chicago. The quoted material is sourced to the 1950 Official Guide; I've concatenated the sentences to make that clear and avoid having consecutive citations. Regarding lightweight consist, both are terms of art. Lightweight means cars in the 1930s-1960s made from steel; oddly I don't think we have a standalone article about it. Passenger car (rail)#1900-1950: Lighter materials, new car types contains discussion. Consist means the equipment used in the train; I've now wiki-linked the term which redirects to Glossary of rail transport terms. Mackensen (talk) 21:35, 10 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the clarification. This DYK is now good to go. Mindmatrix 22:17, 10 November 2013 (UTC)