Template:Did you know nominations/Centris pallida

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The result was: promoted by Johanna (formerly BenLinus1214)^{talk to me!}_{see my work} 00:37, 1 November 2015 (UTC)

Centris pallida[edit]

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... that Centris pallida males regularly have internal temperatures only three degrees Celsius from being lethal?

Created by Floyd Burney (talk). Self-nominated at 06:08, 22 October 2015 (UTC).

Article new enough and long enough. The article is well cited. The hook paragraph is cited, though the citation is paywalled. @Floyd Burney: The paragraph does have a slight peacock working problem though, I would reword to take out "amazing" and word the paragraph from a neutral voice avoiding the works "you" to be encyclopedic.--Kev min § 13:28, 25 October 2015 (UTC)

I have removed the first half of the third sentence. This gets rid of the "you" and the "amazing" to make the paragraph more neutral. How does it look now?Floyd Burney (talk) 18:14, 27 October 2015 (UTC)

Article new enough, long enough, citations check out, paywalled citations and hook citation information taken agf. No policy issues found in second check of article. good to go.--Kev min § 00:11, 28 October 2015 (UTC)