Template:Did you know nominations/Criminal (Ra.One song)

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The result was: rejected by PFHLai (talk) 16:13, 8 January 2012 (UTC)

Criminal (Ra.One song)

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... that when the song was released, the event's telecast rights were sold to a TV channel for 10 crore (US$1.9 million)?

ALT1 ... that the rights to the launch performance of the song "Criminal", from the Bollywood movie Ra.One, were sold to a TV channel for Rs 10 crore (US$1.9 million)?

Created/expanded by Dipankan001 (talk), Meryam90 (talk). Nominated by Dipankan001 (talk) at 13:27, 5 January 2012 (UTC)

You need to bold the DYK subject. It should also actually refer to the article in question as currently, given the hook alone, the entire thing is ambiguous. Something like: (although this needs some work too I'd say!)

"... that the rights to the launch performance of the song "Criminal", from the Bollywood movie Ra.One, were sold to a TV channel for Rs 10 crore (US$1.9 million)?".

Additionally, should probably find out which TV Channel it was that bought it! (I've added a {{Which?}} to the article). (FYI, the info is on the second page of the cited source...) Nik thestoned 15:01, 5 January 2012 (UTC)

It's verifiable - See here. DYK Is interesting! Dipankan ^{In the woods?} 15:22, 5 January 2012 (UTC)

Verifiability isn't the problem here - it's the fact that you say "a TV channel" without saying which TV channel - this should be included. Additionally, this doesn't matter as per the below, sorry... Nik thestoned 15:34, 5 January 2012 (UTC)

Can you help me in this work? (Finding out the TV Channel).Most probably if you dont consider which it can be of great help. It is very amazing.Dipankan ^{In the woods?} 15:41, 5 January 2012 (UTC)

Also fails DYK check (created mainly between the 7th and 12th of December)... Nik thestoned 15:11, 5 January 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean by DYK Check? Can you please explain to me?Dipankan ^{In the woods?} 15:43, 5 January 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, DYK Check is a tool which checks that the article is indeed eligible for Did You Know - and this nomination fails as it does not meet the first article criteria listed above (E.g., it is not less than 5 days old, neither has it been five-fold expanded within this time). Basically, this article is now too old to be featured on DYK. Additionally, I don't speak Hindi and as such research into such subjects is very difficult for me. I did take a quick look earlier but found nothing at all... Nik thestoned 16:33, 5 January 2012 (UTC)