Template:Did you know nominations/Elfie Caroline Huntington
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Lightburst (talk) 00:27, 5 June 2023 (UTC)
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Elfie Caroline Huntington
... that Elfie Caroline Huntington and Joseph Daniel Bagley took photos of Utah's darker side such as excessive drinking and fights?Source: "She also portrayed [Springville,Utah's] darker side-drunks collapsed in the streets, fights breaking out, and preachers rolling into town in boxcars to warn sinners of impending doom." https://www.dialoguejournal.com/wp-content/uploads/sbi/articles/Dialogue_V26N04_251.pdf- Reviewed: (QPQ not required; this is NatalieEmma.BYU's second nomination)
Created by NatalieEmma.BYU (talk) and Netherzone (talk). Nominated by NatalieEmma.BYU (talk) at 18:46, 24 May 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Elfie Caroline Huntington; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
- Hey, NatalieEmma.BYU (and Netherzone), neither your Source link nor the Joseph Daniel Bagley article indicate that Bagley photographed Utah's darker side, so hook will have to be rewritten somewhat. The articles are interesting, so I applaud that. If you want help rewriting the hook, let me know by pinging me (or leave a usertalk message if you don't). Meanwhile I will check the other DYK parameters regarding these two articles. Softlavender (talk) 02:21, 25 May 2023 (UTC)
How about:
- ALT1: ... that Elfie Caroline Huntington (pictured) took photos of turn-of-the-century Utah's darker side such as drunks and fights, while her husband Joseph Daniel Bagley was a portrait photographer?
Might also want to include Huntington's photo with the DYK, but if included it should be cropped vertically to remove the dead air at the top, so that the image works well with the small size of DYK.
--Softlavender (talk) 02:46, 25 May 2023 (UTC)
General eligibility:
- New enough:
- Long enough:
- Other problems:
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Hook eligibility:
- Cited: - No, see my comment above and ALT1.
- Interesting: - See my comment above and ALT1.
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Overall: Softlavender (talk) 03:15, 25 May 2023 (UTC)
- NatalieEmma.BYU, I also note that in this edit you falsified the text of the Source citation in order to justify your inclusion of Bagley. I have now corrected that. Going forward, please do not ever do that again in any part of Wikipedia. Wikipedia takes very unkindly toward people faking references. Softlavender (talk) 03:21, 26 May 2023 (UTC)
Softlavender I am very sorry. I did not mean to falsify any information. I added Bagley because they authored and published their photos together. My mistake. Thank you for all your help. I really appreciate it! NatalieEmma.BYU (talk) 18:44, 26 May 2023 (UTC)
Softlavender I think that ALT1 would be a great hook. This is my second time doing a DYK nomination so I appreciate your patience. Here is a link to a source that says Bagley (and Huntington) took portrait photos. https://www.jstor.org/site/brigham-young-university/huntington-bagley/?searchkey=1685127771313&pagemark=eyJwYWdlIjoyLCJzdGFydHMiOnsiSlNUT1JCYXNpYyI6MjV9fQ%253D%253D "For more than 33 years, they took thousands of photographs, primarily portraits" I will upload a cropped picture of Elfie now. Where is the best place for me to put it for the DYK nomination? Here? — Preceding unsigned comment added by NatalieEmma.BYU (talk • contribs) 19:10, 26 May 2023 (UTC)
- Hi, NatalieEmma.BYU, I have uploaded the current photo to the top of this DYK nomination, and added the word "(pictured)" to ALT1. If you want to upload a cropped version you can either just replace the file name (if it's a new file name), or add the new crop as an alternate DYK image as is done here [1] at Template:Did you know nominations/Plas Dinas. BTW it seems to me that if you are cropping out the extra space at the top you'll probably need to crop out the black borders as well .... Softlavender (talk) 23:37, 29 May 2023 (UTC)
- Hi, I work with NatalieEmma.BYU in the BYU Library. I added the cropped image. It's making me wish I had time to do a little photoshopping to clean up that patch on her ear! I recently found out that we can easily access the full resolution image, which NatalieEmma.BYU will be uploading as a new version to the original image later. Here is the old one, for reference:
- Rachel Helps (BYU) (talk) 17:21, 30 May 2023 (UTC)
- Rachel Helps (BYU), if you do anything else to the cropped image, please remove the bubble in the upper right corner. Thanks. Softlavender (talk) 03:59, 31 May 2023 (UTC)
- Rachel Helps (BYU) (talk) 17:21, 30 May 2023 (UTC)
- OK, ALT1 is ready to go now, with the cropped image which is at the top of the DYK nomination. Softlavender (talk) 23:36, 30 May 2023 (UTC)
- @Softlavender and NatalieEmma.BYU: Interesting articles. I wanted to promote the hook but it appears SounderBruce has tagged the top of the Joseph Daniel Bagley article. We probably need to address the concern before the double hook proceeds. Lightburst (talk) 15:30, 4 June 2023 (UTC)
- Thanks for the ping, Lightburst; I didn't have the Bagley article on my watchlist for some reason so I missed that development. I have now addressed that issue on the article's talkpage (feel free to assess and/or chime in), and have now removed the tag. Softlavender (talk) 21:58, 4 June 2023 (UTC)
- @Softlavender: Thanks for taking care of it. Lightburst (talk) 00:23, 5 June 2023 (UTC)
- Thanks for the ping, Lightburst; I didn't have the Bagley article on my watchlist for some reason so I missed that development. I have now addressed that issue on the article's talkpage (feel free to assess and/or chime in), and have now removed the tag. Softlavender (talk) 21:58, 4 June 2023 (UTC)