The article is a 5fold expansion, passes DYK check, and is reasonably well-sourced. The hook is sourced and within regulations but reads a little long and has grammar/style issues. Possibly delete "on Whit Monday" and reword the text to make it more idiomatic. Thus,
The photo is PD and was a photo of the day but could it be cropped for this purpose?. — AjaxSmack 09:11, 16 February 2013 (UTC)
Thanks for the review. I have added the name of User:Ipigott to the contributors list as he has added substantial text. The ALT1 Hook proposed is fine. I have also cropped the img. --Nvvchar. 15:59, 16 February 2013 (UTC)
I put the cropped version at a different filename over at Commons to preserve the original. I'll show both here for others to compare.
←crop / original→
Looks good to go with ALT1. — AjaxSmack 22:58, 16 February 2013 (UTC)