Template:Did you know nominations/Georgia Redmayne

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 14:01, 29 March 2017 (UTC)

Georgia Redmayne

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... that cricketer Georgia Redmayne's 87-year-old grandfather vaulted the boundary fence and embraced her after she had become the first player to hit a WNCL century for Tasmanian Roar? Source: Haigh, Gideon (8 February 2017). "Cricket the best medicine for a doctor in the making". The Australian. Retrieved 25 March 2017.)
- ALT1:... that in 2005, future Hobart Hurricanes cricketer Georgia Redmayne took a double hat-trick (four wickets in four deliveries) for the Alstonville Maroon Under-12s? Source: Staff writer (15 February 2005). "Batsmen have Georgia on their minds". The Northern Star. Retrieved 25 March 2017.

Created by Bahnfrend (talk). Self-nominated at 13:07, 25 March 2017 (UTC).

Article length and age are fine, no copyvio or plagiarism concerns, reliable sources are used. I would just include a {{subscription required}} to the Gideon Haigh reference. I like the first hook! = paul2520 18:06, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

There is close paraphrasing from the sources which needs to be rewritten in your own words or put in quotes:
Source: I have always been interested in anatomy, body systems and recovery from injury and disease
Article: Redmayne has said that she has always been interested in anatomy, body systems and recovery from injury and disease
Source: I am passionate about addressing health inequities in rural and remote Australia.
Article: as a rural student she is passionate about addressing health inequities in rural and remote Australia.
Source: finished the season nearly 200 runs clear of the next best batter in total runs scored for the regular season
Article: she finished nearly 200 runs clear of the next best batter in total runs scored for the regular season
Yoninah (talk) 23:15, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

Done - as suggested - thanks for the comments - Bahnfrend (talk) 03:10, 26 March 2017 (UTC)

OK, thanks. Restoring tick per Paul2520's review. Yoninah (talk) 15:00, 26 March 2017 (UTC)