Template:Did you know nominations/Island No. 2

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 17:18, 10 December 2021 (UTC)

Island No. 2

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... that in 1908, Island No. 2 was simultaneously deeded to two different people, and was the subject of "one of the most interesting documents ever placed on record in Napa County"? Source: "She Needs Money: Mrs. Marie E. Hanbury Mortgages Island No. 2 to Bank of Napa". Napa Weekly Journal. Napa, California. 1909-01-01. p. 1.

ALT1: ... that in 1908, Island No. 2 in California was simultaneously deeded to two different people?
Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Leipzig Prison

5x expanded by JPxG (talk). Self-nominated at 02:48, 18 November 2021 (UTC).

@JPxG: Article is new enough, long enough (i removed its stub classification), plagiarism-free, sourced, and neutral. I'd trim the hook to just the first clause—a quote indirectly saying your hook is interesting is just a little tacky. It is interesting and cited, though. By the way, if this hiram johnson is the same as future california governor Hiram Johnson, I'd link that in the article, that's interesting. QPQ has been done, this is good to go once we work out the hook. Super interesting stuff! theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/them) 23:02, 18 November 2021 (UTC)

@Theleekycauldron: Hook trim seems fine to me. I'll have to look into the stuff about Hiram Johnson. Thanks for the review! jp×g 23:38, 18 November 2021 (UTC)

approving ALT1 (I added "in California" because Island No. 2 would make a good album title)—good luck with your GA! theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/them) 03:03, 19 November 2021 (UTC)