Template:Did you know nominations/Italian cave salamander

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by G S Palmer (talkcontribs) 20:37, 24 October 2014 (UTC)

Italian cave salamander, Ambrosi's cave salamander[edit]

Italian cave salamander

5x expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self nominated at 08:58, 14 September 2014 (UTC).

  • Review for Italian cave salamander: nominated for DYK one day after expansion began, and was expanded from 270 bytes to about 1900, satisfying date and length criteria. A snippet view on Google Books of the 1978 version of A Field Guide to the Reptiles and Amphibians of Britain and Europe states this salamander is also found in SE France (page 36, #5). It also states the toes are "stubby", whereas this article says "pointed". Are these facts superceded by more recent research? Other than that, all other text is well-sourced, and I'm assuming good faith for the offline ref #2. Mindmatrix 17:35, 9 October 2014 (UTC)
  • Review for Ambrosi's cave salamander: nominated for DYK one day after expansion began, and was expanded from 323 bytes to 2240, satisfying date and length criteria. I am assuming good faith for ref #2, which is used to support the bulk of the article. The IUCN ref indicates that a sub-population may be reassigned to S. italicus, which I think merits inclusion in the article. (It also mentions additional details for habitat, which would also be welcome in the article.) Please remove opinion/commentary "is of some reassurance". Please fix copy/paste error for "Italian cave salamander" in status section. Overall, only a few minor issues to address for this article. Mindmatrix 17:53, 9 October 2014 (UTC)
  • Overall review: double QPQ completed. Assuming good faith for offline ref (same one for both articles). Hook is reasonable length and has a citation in both articles; as it is offline, I will assume good faith for this. Image appears to be OK and has a CC licence. There are only a few outstanding minor issues to address. Mindmatrix 17:56, 9 October 2014 (UTC)
  • @Mindmatrix: Thank you for the review. The Collins book is back in the public library so I can no longer refer to it. The distribution of the Italian cave salamander comes from the IUCN source and that does not mention southeastern France and I have removed the mention of the toes being pointed. With regard to Ambrosi's cave salamander, I have made the alterations you suggest. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:30, 24 October 2014 (UTC)
  • Good to go. My only concern regarding mention of southeastern France is the difference of the described ranges in the sources, but I'll accept the more recent version from IUCN as having greater accuracy. (It also appears that Google has pulled the snippet view of A Field Guide to the Reptiles and Amphibians of Britain and Europe since I previously accessed it.) Mindmatrix 14:57, 24 October 2014 (UTC)