Template:Did you know nominations/James W. Fifield Jr.

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:11, 10 June 2015 (UTC)

James W. Fifield Jr.[edit]

Created by Iselilja (talk). Self-nominated at 23:56, 26 April 2015 (UTC).

  • The reference used for this statement neither gives the date 1935 nor mentions the organization "Spiritual Mobilization". I suggest you propose a different hook or find a different source. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:14, 16 May 2015 (UTC)
Point above resolved. Length of hook and article OK and both are cited (hook uses a pay to view site). No image in the article - the church?. No paraphrasing spotted with random checks. A few spelling errors corrected. I think a hook based on "apostle to millionaires" would get more clicks, but this hook is OK. Thanks for your work. Victuallers (talk) 08:26, 7 June 2015 (UTC)