Probably needs a new hook as readers who aren't NFL fans or very familiar with American football may not see the interest of this hook. If a reader does not know what an "AP All-Pro" is or its significance, they won't find the hook interesting. Rejecting ALT0 per WP:DYKINT as well as the old supplementary guidelines (i.e. don't assume all readers are familiar with the sport you're talking about). Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 08:43, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
. Requesting a second opinion. By writing out "Associated Press" and adding "recognized" helps clarify that this is a national recognition. « Gonzo fan2007(talk) @ 15:03, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
Will probably have to disagree here. Readers might still not necessarily get what it means to be an "All-Pro" or how it is a big deal. Historically, our sports hooks have tended to underperform and be criticized as only appealing to sports fans, and I can't see how this hook or angle is any different. A completely different angle is probably needed here. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 15:14, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
. Requesting a second opinion. I.e. from another editor please. « Gonzo fan2007(talk) @ 16:14, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
I don't necessarily love the current hook, but I think the article has potential for something interesting to be picked out from it. Hey man im josh (talk) 11:59, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
I'm fine with ALT2 hey man im josh. Thank you. « Gonzo fan2007(talk) @ 14:08, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
For anyone reading, I'm commenting for clarity that I am not reviewing this nomination, I just proposed an alternative hook. This still needs a reviewer. Hey man im josh (talk) 11:40, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
needs a review on ALT2. « Gonzo fan2007(talk) @ 14:46, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
The whole article needs a review.--Launchballer 17:54, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
I'll review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:04, 28 June 2024 (UTC)