Template:Did you know nominations/Pat Dunsmore, Drake Dunsmore

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The result was: promoted by Carabinieri (talk) 01:40, 16 May 2012 (UTC)

Drake Dunsmore, Pat Dunsmore

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... that neither National Football League tight end father and son Pat nor Drake Dunsmore played organized American football before high school?

Reviewed: 12th of 12 QPQs for Template:Did you know nominations/Kieran Govers, Simon Orchard, Robert Hammond, Nathan Burgers, Matthew Butturini, Kiel Brown, Joel Carroll, Mark Knowles (field hockey), Fergus Kavanagh, Glenn Turner (field hockey), Jason Wilson (field hockey), Russell Ford and Template:Did you know nominations/Joe Rosentover. I confess, this may be grammatically incorrect. I welcome correction.

Created/expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nom at 22:38, 29 April 2012 (UTC)

Pat Dunsmore is a 5+× expansion, while Drake Dunsmore is a new page. Both are sized adequately and sourced. I agree that the hook seems ungrammatical, but I can't quite put my finger on what's off. – Muboshgu (talk) 19:56, 15 May 2012 (UTC)

ALT1: ... that neither Pat nor Drake Dunsmore, father and son National Football League tight ends, played organized American football before high school?