Template:Did you know nominations/Raquel Liberman
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 12:39, 21 March 2015 (UTC)
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Raquel Liberman[edit]
- ... that Raquel Liberman escaped twice from slavery and helped to dissolve the Zwi Migdal, an early 20th-century Argentine human trafficking ring?
- Comment: I started the translation from the Spanish article in my sandbox; Also I'm the author of this article in Spanish Wikipedia too
Moved to mainspace by Bsea (talk). Self nominated at 02:31, 10 February 2015 (UTC).
This article is new enough and long enough. No QPQ needed. Citations generally look OK, AGFing because most are Spanish. However, there are two significant problems. One is that it does not read like native English: a lot reads like translationese. Also, there is some very close paraphrasing of the only English source, the JWA article. Relentlessly (talk) 23:48, 11 February 2015 (UTC)
- Worthy article on a subject I knew nothing about. But it needs a few more rough edges smoothed off before it's ready for MP. It's just too obvious when << >> is used instead of quotes. Can someone with knowledge of Spanish help with this? EEng (talk) 14:20, 12 February 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you for your reviews, with this feed back I can improve my English and sorry for my lateness. Yes many of the citation are in Spanish, I found some English sources. For a quick check watch this video of a future film of Gabriela Bohm [1] it gives same information, but this best source will give extra information to the article and check all the Spanish citations, [2] search "Raquel Liberman", I found also this one [3] that gives an idea of the trafficking network. If any of you or anyone interested in the article or subject can give a native English to it. Will be very welcome.--Bsea (talk) 22:26, 12 February 2015 (UTC)
I've gone in and done a complete rewrite of the page, to improve the English language usage, citing additional English sources where I could find them. I suspect it will pass DYK now, but someone else who's not me should now review it. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 03:22, 4 March 2015 (UTC)
- Worthy article on a subject I knew nothing about. But it needs a few more rough edges smoothed off before it's ready for MP. It's just too obvious when << >> is used instead of quotes. Can someone with knowledge of Spanish help with this? EEng (talk) 14:20, 12 February 2015 (UTC)
Lots of Spanish sources but the English language source and Google translate confirm the DYK~ hook. I added extra ref callouts near to the DYK faCcts. Good length, well researched and (sadly) ideal for Women's History Month. Neutral and close paraphrasing has been addressed by MMO. Image is said to be free but its very poor and cannot be enlarged from source. Thanks for this contribution. Victuallers (talk) 16:22, 9 March 2015 (UTC)
