Template:Did you know nominations/Yohana Yembise

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:28, 16 December 2018 (UTC)

Yohana Yembise

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• ... that Yohana Yembise is the first female minister in the Indonesian government to come from Papua? Source: The Jakarta Post

• Reviewed: Bathroom reading

Created by Juxlos (talk). Self-nominated at 18:40, 24 November 2018 (UTC).

• New enough, long enough, neutral, no copyvio; QPQ done; hook seems good. A couple points: remove flag from infobox; explain SEAMEO RELC; the last sentence in the "Academic career" section seems to trail off; you may want to note whether her regency campaign was successful or unsuccessful, since it's not clearly stated; you may be able to rephrase the final sentence of the Politics section so that there is no need to say "the two issues mentioned before". Also, do you have a citation for the minister whom Yembise has succeeded? Otherwise, this looks good. Hameltion (talk, contribs) 14:57, 27 November 2018 (UTC)

• @Hameltion: Flag, SEAMEO RELC, trailing sentence, regency campaign, final sentence resolved. The predecessor is in the Jakarta Post citation - I added it in the body just to be clearer. Juxlos (talk) 09:48, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

• Looks good now. Hameltion (talk, contribs) 14:42, 28 November 2018 (UTC)