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Welcome

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Hello, Fconteh02, and Welcome to Wikipedia!

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Speedy deletion nomination of Cloud Computing Data Security

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Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. This is a notice to inform you that a tag has been placed on Cloud Computing Data Security requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section A1 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because it is a very short article providing little or no context to the reader. Please see Wikipedia:Stub for our minimum information standards for short articles. Also please note that articles must be on notable subjects and should provide references to reliable sources that verify their content.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator, or if you have already done so, you can place a request here. Onel5969 TT me 17:40, 4 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome!

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Hello, Fconteh02, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 04:32, 15 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Cloud Computing Data Security moved to draftspace

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An article you recently created, Cloud Computing Data Security, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. nearlyevil665 16:58, 25 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome!

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Hello, Fconteh02, and welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Unfortunately, one or more of the pages you created, such as Cloud Computing Data Security, may not conform to some of Wikipedia's content policies and may not be retained. In short, the topic of an article must be notable and have already been the subject of publication by reliable and independent sources.

Please review Your first article for an overview of the article creation process. The Article Wizard is available to help you create an article, where it will be reviewed and considered for publication. For information on how to request a new article that can be created by someone else, see Requested articles. If you are stuck, come to the Teahouse, where experienced Wikipedians can help you through the processes.

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Your drafts

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Hi. I have moved your drafts back to your userspace - they are currently at User:Fconteh02/Cloud Computing Shared Security Responsibility Model and User:Fconteh02/Cloud Computing Data Security. Please don't move them back to mainspace until you have made some important improvements to them.

  • The opening sentence of your lead needs to describe the thing your article is about in a succinct fashion. It should start with something like Cloud computing data security is [or "relies of" or "refers to"]... and then go on to give the reader enough information about the topic that if they don't read past the first sentence, they should still have a sense of that the topic is about. The rest of the lead should go on to summarize all the major points of the article, and shouldn't include any information that isn't discussed in more depth in the body of the article.
  • Avoid jargon or promotional language. Don't write things like Enterprises large and small are increasingly adopting.... "Enterprises" is PR jargon - just use a straightforward English term like "companies". Also be specific - what do you mean by "large and small" (these are extremely vague), as is "increasingly" - claims like this need to be backed with reliable sources, and need to include information.
  • Quotes should only be used where either the precise wording is important, or when the quote itself is the subject of commentary. A quote like Cloud computing is a model for enabling ubiquitous, convenient, on-demand network access to a shared pool of configurable computing resources (e.g., networks, servers, storage, applications, and services) that can be rapidly provisioned and released with minimal management effort or service provider interaction." is actually unhelpful to readers because it's nothing but a string of marketing jargon.

Please read pages 7-9 of the "Editing Wikipedia" brochure that I have linked here for more information. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:53, 26 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Cloud Computing Shared Security Responsibility Model

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A tag has been placed on Cloud Computing Shared Security Responsibility Model, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator. WaddlesJP13 (talk | contributions) 05:50, 29 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Nomination of Cloud Computing Shared Security Responsibility Model for deletion

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A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Cloud Computing Shared Security Responsibility Model is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Cloud Computing Shared Security Responsibility Model until a consensus is reached, and anyone, including you, is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article.

WaddlesJP13 (talk | contributions) 21:08, 29 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Cloud Computing Data Security

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Information icon Hello, Fconteh02. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Cloud Computing Data Security, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 17:03, 25 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Cloud Computing Data Security

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Hello, Fconteh02. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Cloud Computing Data Security".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 18:13, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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