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Your submission at Articles for creation: Dawn Mountain (February 10)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MatthewVanitas was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The Houston Chronicle citation is a good start, but the majority of your content should be cited to outside observers. Wikipedia is not a place for Dawn Mountain to just talk about itself.

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MatthewVanitas (talk) 20:13, 10 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Gurujii, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! MatthewVanitas (talk) 20:13, 10 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dawn Mountain (February 10)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Still a closely suggestive advertisement they would show to business partners and clients, the sources are simply announcements and mentions and there's no automatic inherited notability from anything or anyone.

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SwisterTwister talk 23:51, 10 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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13.8.125.11 (talk) 21:03, 21 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hi still pending review thank you

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dawn Mountain (April 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Topcipher was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please consider this statement here - "They also receive discounted retreat registration fees" - this is what is being referred to (among many other aspects of this article) to deem more like an advertisement.
Also, various aspects of this article have been paraphrased; kindly refer these link here - https://tools.wmflabs.org/copyvios/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&oldid=767252208&action=compare&url=http%3A%2F%2Fdawnmountain.org%2Fteachings%2Fdzogchen-cycles%2F, https://tools.wmflabs.org/copyvios/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&oldid=767252208&action=compare&url=http%3A%2F%2Fdawnmountain.org%2Fhistory%2F

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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TopCipher (talk) 17:35, 3 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Dawn Mountain concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Dawn Mountain, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 21:04, 24 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Dawn Mountain

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Dawn Mountain, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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