Hello, Hanneke777! Welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. You may benefit from following some of the links below, which will help you get the most out of Wikipedia. If you have any questions you can ask me on my talk page, or place {{helpme}} on your talk page and ask your question there. Please remember to sign your name on talk pages by clicking or by typing four tildes "~~~~"; this will automatically produce your name and the date. If you are already excited about Wikipedia, you might want to consider being "adopted" by a more experienced editor or joining a WikiProject to collaborate with others in creating and improving articles of your interest. Click here for a directory of all the WikiProjects. Finally, please do your best to always fill in the edit summary field when making edits to pages. Happy editing! Randykitty (talk) 09:21, 26 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Hi, we have some clear guidelines on how to format biographies, please see WP:MOSBIO. The biography as it stands is a reasonable start, but suffers from multiple problems. Please read the policies/guidelines linked in the tags on top of the article, this will help you improve the article. Thanks and happy editing! --Randykitty (talk) 10:09, 26 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not Randykitty, but I can answer on their behalf: if you think you have solved a tagged problem, you are free to remove the maintenance tag. In this case, the article is definitely no longer an "orphan", so feel free to remove the tag. Did this answer your question? (Pinging @Randykitty: if they want to see this message too). – Finnusertop (talk ⋅ contribs) 12:22, 26 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
