User talk:Heypeary

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Hello, Heypeary, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Unfortunately, your edit to User:Heypeary/sandbox does not conform to Wikipedia's Neutral Point of View policy (NPOV). Wikipedia articles should refer only to facts and interpretations that have been stated in print or on reputable websites or other forms of media.

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Example (December 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by WikiOriginal-9 was:

This submission seems to be a test edit and not an article worthy of an encyclopedia. Please use the sandbox for any editing tests, but do not submit for review until you have an article that you want reviewed for inclusion in Wikipedia. Thank you.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Example and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 09:41, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Heypeary! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 09:41, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Thanwa Boonsoongnern (December 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Mach61 was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Thanwa Boonsoongnern and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Mach61 (talk) 17:12, 4 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

CS1 error on The Toys (Thai musician)

Hello, I'm Qwerfjkl (bot). I have automatically detected that this edit performed by you, on the page The Toys (Thai musician), may have introduced referencing errors. They are as follows:

A "bare URL and missing title" error. References show this error when they do not have a title. Please edit the article to add the appropriate title parameter to the reference. (Fix | Ask for help)

Please check this page and fix the errors highlighted. If you think this is a false positive, you can report it to my operator. Thanks, Qwerfjkl (bot) (talk) 05:25, 8 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Toys (Thai musician) (December 8)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Qcne was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Severe tone issues throughout, will need a complete rewrite.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:The Toys (Thai musician) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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Qcne (talk) 12:34, 8 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

December 2023

Please do not add commentary, your own point of view, or your own personal analysis to Wikipedia articles, as you did to The Toys (Thai musician). Doing so violates Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy and breaches the formal tone expected in an encyclopedia. Thank you. Qcne (talk) 12:38, 8 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Heypeary please do not add more non-neutral pov text to the The_Toys_(Thai_musician) article. Your changes are completely inappropriate for Wikipedia. I have undone your changes, and I note this is the fourth time your changes have been done. You risk being blocked if you continue to do so.

Very carefully read WP:NPOV and understand it fully before making further contributions. Qcne (talk) 10:59, 10 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

CS1 error on The Toys (Thai musician)

Hello, I'm Qwerfjkl (bot). I have automatically detected that this edit performed by you, on the page The Toys (Thai musician), may have introduced referencing errors. They are as follows:

A "bare URL and missing title" error. References show this error when they do not have a title. Please edit the article to add the appropriate title parameter to the reference. (Fix | Ask for help)

Please check this page and fix the errors highlighted. If you think this is a false positive, you can report it to my operator. Thanks, Qwerfjkl (bot) (talk) 08:10, 10 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Thanwa Boonsoongnern (December 10)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Qcne was:

Thank you for your submission, but the subject of this article already exists in Wikipedia. You can find it and improve it at The_Toys_(Thai_musician) instead.

The comment the reviewer left was:

But before you improve the The_Toys_(Thai_musician) please read WP:NPOV because your changes have been completely inappropriate.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Thanwa Boonsoongnern and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Qcne (talk) 11:05, 10 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Thanwa Boonsoongnern

Hello, Heypeary. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, "Thanwa Boonsoongnern".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. ✗plicit 14:00, 10 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]