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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:02, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
Hello, JC847966 I appreciate the scholarly review it was very inciteful and will use it as a reference to enhance the article. The peer review provided me with a lot of fluid ideas and look to incorporate those ideas into the article. Here are the edits that I considered making when revising my article: I took your advice and created an alternative view or the circumstance that is presented to these women to provide a neutral tone so that the audience may come to their own conclusions. So I added the decision that the women have to within my sandbox to choose between working at a standard bar or working for a tourist. In addition I looked to highlight particular questions that were presented within your review of the article such asAre the Dominican prostitutes hoping to travel back with the men out of the country?
I have added the fact that these women do look to marry these men in hope of a better lifestyle implying that they would do whatever it takes to secure that lifestyle.
Are these prostitutes specifically looking for foreign suitors, or is prostitution such a rampant problem in the DR that tourist prostitution is inevitable?
This question is tricky because as explained through the article its main focus is sex tourism implying that these women are looking to entertain foreign suitors. However, I did include how many Dominican women look down upon their men and praise European men. IT was great working on the article including your reviews it allowed for new ideas to flow and helped me add content to the article. Thank you and have a great evening GERSH.DGERSH.D (talk) 22:59, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
Acknowlegement of Peer Review
Please complete the assigned training modules. --TrudiJ (talk) 20:56, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
Hello, JC847966 I appreciate the scholarly review it was very inciteful and will use it as a reference to enhance the article. The peer review provided me with a lot of fluid ideas and look to incorporate those ideas into the article. Here are the edits that I considered making when revising my article: I took your advice and created an alternative view or the circumstance that is presented to these women to provide a neutral tone so that the audience may come to their own conclusions. So I added the decision that the women have to within my sandbox to choose between working at a standard bar or working for a tourist. In addition I looked to highlight particular questions that were presented within your review of the article such asAre the Dominican prostitutes hoping to travel back with the men out of the country?
I have added the fact that these women do look to marry these men in hope of a better lifestyle implying that they would do whatever it takes to secure that lifestyle.
Are these prostitutes specifically looking for foreign suitors, or is prostitution such a rampant problem in the DR that tourist prostitution is inevitable?
This question is tricky because as explained through the article its main focus is sex tourism implying that these women are looking to entertain foreign suitors. However, I did include how many Dominican women look down upon their men and praise European men. IT was great working on the article including your reviews it allowed for new ideas to flow and helped me add content to the article. Thank you and have a great eveningGERSH.D (talk) 03:29, 9 October 2021 (UTC)GERSH.D
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[edit]Your article was very interesting to read about, on a topic that was newly exposed to me. Being so, it allowed me to see that I needed more background on the topic in order to fully understand. I would recommend that providing facts that relate to why the sect of revolutionaries complete the actions that they do? and why do people oppose or agree with them? who are their and who do they despise. I think answering the questions that relate to the ones I've mentioned will allow the reader to better fully understand the article that they are researching.
Otherwise the outline of your article was pleasant and it flowed very neatly. Keep up the great work and let me know if yo have any questions comments and concerns about my feedback. Thank you
-Taylor Capicchioni Taylor Capicchioni (talk) 05:59, 30 September 2021 (UTC)
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