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Your submission at Articles for creation: Kiki Solvej (July 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

please see WP:REFB for help with formatting sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Theroadislong (talk) 16:01, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Jpbenitez2000! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Theroadislong (talk) 16:01, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Please use your own words

Hi Jpbenitez2000, when you created Draft:Kiki Solvej you used text from sources such as this one with only minimal changes. For instance, the source (an interview) says

"I grew up in a very musical family, my mother studied music and art aesthetics and my father is a priest also surrounded by music. Since a little kid, I loved to think about my own songs, even if I could not write them down yet, and to show them later to my parents."

and the draft has

"Kiki was raised in an environment filled with music. Her mother studied music and art aesthetics, while her father, a priest, constantly was surrounded by music"

and

"Since she was a young child, she loved to think about her own songs, even if she could not write them down yet."

You added a link to the source at the end of each of the sentences quoted above, so you were obviously not trying to do anything unethical; however, the kind of rephrasing you did is known as close paraphrasing and it is a form of plagiarism (and potentially also a copyright violation). Please read the info on close paraphrasing and how to avoid it, and make sure to rewrite the draft thoroughly in your own words before submitting it again. --bonadea contributions talk 16:16, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

July 2024

Hello, I'm Notcharizard. I wanted to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions to Pacha Group have been undone because they appeared to be promotional. Advertising and using Wikipedia as a "soapbox" are against Wikipedia policy and not permitted; Wikipedia articles should be written objectively, using independent sources, and from a neutral perspective. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about Wikipedia. Thank you. -- NotCharizard ^🗨 12:30, 31 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]