User talk:Maganolla

February 2021

Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. This is a message letting you know that one or more of your recent edits to Germany's Next Topmodel (season 16) have been undone by an automated computer program called ClueBot NG.

ClueBot NG makes very few mistakes, but it does happen. If you believe the change you made was constructive, please read about it, report it here, remove this message from your talk page, and then make the edit again.
For help, take a look at the introduction.
The following is the log entry regarding this message: Germany's Next Topmodel (season 16) was changed by Maganolla (u) (t) ANN scored at 0.857837 on 2021-02-17T10:15:44+00:00

Thank you. ClueBot NG (talk) 10:15, 17 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Maganolla, you are invited to the Teahouse!

Hi Maganolla! Thanks for contributing to Wikipedia.
Be our guest at the Teahouse! The Teahouse is a friendly space where new editors can ask questions about contributing to Wikipedia and get help from experienced editors like Cordless Larry (talk).

Visit the Teahouse

We hope to see you there!

Delivered by HostBot on behalf of the Teahouse hosts

16:02, 18 February 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Fruit Slabs (February 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by ReaderofthePack was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This needs to be re-written for tone. It also could use more sourcing to establish notability. Some of the sources really only mentioned the company/brand in passing. Thrillist is fine, the LAT is OK, but really only mentions the brand in passing.

One of the sources, Forbes, was a contributor post. Contributor posts don't have the editorial oversight that an article written for their magazine would, so they're seen as self-published sources and are typically unusable as a source on Wikipedia. Hello Giggles wouldn't be seen as a RS on here since it has unclear editorial oversight and also, the brand is only briefly mentioned in passing.

Matador Network would be unusable since they allow people to advertise via sponsored posts. While the company isn't the focus of the piece and is only mentioned in passing (making it a WP:TRIVIAL source), the fact that one can purchase coverage makes them unreliable on Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Fruit Slabs and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Fruit Slabs, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

ReaderofthePack(formerly Tokyogirl79) (｡◕‿◕｡) 10:09, 23 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome!

Hi Maganolla! I noticed your contributions and wanted to welcome you to the Wikipedia community. I hope you like it here and decide to stay.

As you get started, you may find this short tutorial helpful:

Learn more about editing

Alternatively, the contributing to Wikipedia page covers the same topics.

If you have any questions, we have a friendly space where experienced editors can help you here:

Get help at the Teahouse

If you are not sure where to help out, you can find a task here:

Volunteer at the Task Center

Please remember to sign your messages on talk pages by typing four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically insert your username and the date.

Happy editing! ReaderofthePack(formerly Tokyogirl79) (｡◕‿◕｡) 10:09, 23 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Don't take the decline too badly - it's really difficult to establish notability and find usable sources, particularly when you're new. I went through the same thing when I started editing! ReaderofthePack(formerly Tokyogirl79) (｡◕‿◕｡) 10:10, 23 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I actually went ahead and did a major overhaul of the page and added some sourcing. If you want to resubmit it, feel free! ReaderofthePack(formerly Tokyogirl79) (｡◕‿◕｡) 10:32, 23 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Fruit Slabs has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Fruit Slabs. Thanks! –Novem Linguae (talk) 12:07, 23 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Fruit Slabs (February 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Right now, with the current sourcing, does not pass either WP:GNG or WP:CORPDEPTH. Novem Linguae's source assessment is pretty much on target, except that the two sources they evaluated as acceptable, are not in-depth enough to pass GNG, and the totality of the current sourcing isn't enough to pass CORPDEPTH.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Fruit Slabs and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Fruit Slabs, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Onel5969 ^{TT me} 03:46, 24 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Fruit Slabs

Hello, Maganolla. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Fruit Slabs, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Draft space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for article space.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion under CSD G13. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it. You may request userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available here.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 04:02, 29 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Paid?

You put a paid notice on your User page, but neglected to indicate the company or person who is paying you. But if it is no longer relevant (active), you can delete it. David notMD (talk) 04:47, 9 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for this! I didn't realize that was there. Appreciate this and have deleted the paid aspect. Maganolla (talk) 04:57, 9 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]