User talk:Monsieurtopcat

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AAT Kings

Thanks for your efforts in editing the AAT Kings article. Unfortunately none of your entries are cited. While the information may be correct, Wiki needs a cite to verify, see the original research section for guidance. You have also knocked out some text that was already cited, eg the 1983 merger between AAT & Australian Pacific Touring.

You may have also introduced some inaccuracies, eg I believe the Page family actually became shareholders in Australian Pacific in the late 1960s and that the origins of AAT was in NSW in the 1930s, this lines up with what is on the company's website.[1]

Of course there is a possibility that the information currently on the article is incorrect, best place to discuss is on the article's talk page.

Also some of the text added could be considered promotional, eg the TreadRight info. It's a bit of an imperfect science, but as a rule of thumb, if you just state the facts and try to avoid events portraying the company in a positive or negative light, this will go along way to solving.

Also the Timeline appears to be a duplication of the prose section, anything noteworthy should be included here.

Sorry if it appears I am trying to tear your contribution to shreds, I'm not, its just that the rules & regulations are in place in an attempt to maintain Wiki's integrity. I have reversed your posts, but please feel free to have another attempt. Mo7838 (talk) 11:28, 29 April 2014 (UTC)

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