User talk:NNU-12-22100555

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Again, welcome! bobrayner (talk) 16:04, 18 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome students from Nanjing Normal University

1, Hello. Are you a student at Nanjing Normal University? If you are I want to say hello.

2, My name is Anna. I live in Haikou, Hainan. I come from Canada.

3, I can help you if you need.

4, Don't worry. Be brave. You can write. No problem.

Some good things to help you:

1, Look at other articles. See how they organize it. Copy the style.

2, Use the information you get for your article, and write it in your words.

3, Don't use baike. It is not professionally written.

4, Put this at the end of the sentences or paragraphs to show where the information comes from:

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==References==

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Anna Frodesiak (talk) 16:08, 18 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Momi cafe

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A tag has been placed on Momi cafe requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section A7 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the article appears to be about a person, organization (band, club, company, etc.) or web content, but it does not indicate how or why the subject is important or significant: that is, why an article about that subject should be included in an encyclopedia. Under the criteria for speedy deletion, such articles may be deleted at any time. Please see the guidelines for what is generally accepted as notable.

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Removing Speedy at Momi cafe

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Speedy deletion nomination of Momi Cafe

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A tag has been placed on Momi Cafe, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become an encyclopedia article. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Business for more information.

If you think that this notice was placed here in error, contest the deletion by clicking on the button labelled "Click here to contest this speedy deletion". Doing so will take you to the talk page where you will find a pre-formatted place for you to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. You can also visit the the page's talk page directly to give your reasons, but be aware that once tagged for speedy deletion, if the page meets the criterion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag yourself, but don't hesitate to add information to the page that would render it more in conformance with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, you can contact one of these administrators to request that the administrator userfy the page or email a copy to you. Mbch331 (talk) 13:18, 20 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

HAPPY HELP Class help chat (QQ) (Teacher, classmates, Anna, and others are here.) Class page

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 02:59, 21 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Use Spaces Spaces usually come after punctuation marks. Instead of this: I like bunnies(rabbits).They are not only cute,but friendly too. Try this: I like bunnies (rabbits). They are not only cute, but friendly too.

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 04:23, 21 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Protect Your Article 1. Putting lots and lots of references into your article protects it from being deleted. 2. Put references in your article like this example: Rabbits are cute.<ref>http://www.about-rabbits.com</ref> 3. Add this to the bottom of the article: ==References== {{reflist}} 4. Don't use Baidu.baike, Hudong, Tianya and sites that are not professionally written. 5. Write in your own words. Just the facts. Don't copy and paste. 6. Make your article style like other articles.

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 11:42, 21 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Link Link to your article when you communicate. Like this: Come and see my new article. It's called [[Dumpling]].

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 04:21, 22 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Problems with Momi Cafe, Momi cafe and Maodetiankongzhicheng

Hi!
I can see that two of the articles you started have been started have been speedily deleted:

13:57, 20 September 2011 JamesBWatson (talk | contribs) deleted "Momi Cafe" (G11: Unambiguous advertising or promotion)
13:27, 19 September 2011 Lectonar (talk | contribs) deleted "Momi cafe" (G11: Unambiguous advertising or promotion)
07:27, 21 September 2011 Lectonar (talk | contribs) deleted "Momi cafe" (it is still essentially an advertisement; notability is also not established. Btw, it is probably a good place to "hang out", but that does not make it encyclopedic.)

I can see you have started another one, Maodetiankongzhicheng. Unfortunately, that might well be speedily deleted too, and for the same reasons.
From what I can see, there are a number of "猫的天空之城" (that looks like "Cat's sky's Castle" to me, btw) cafes. Obviously there is one in Suzhou, but from here it appears there are quite a few others. There are any number of cafe chains and any number of bookstore chains. What appears and the most interesting thing about Momi is the postcards. This could mean that the article is not about "just another cafe" or bookshop, but about something that makes it stands out, or in Wikipedia terms, is notable. (I must admit, it's drawing a long bow , but anyways. Hey, I can read one of the postcards: Tonari no Totoro...)

A question: where does the name "Momi" come from? It's not anywhere in "Māo de tiānkōng zhī chéng". Is it simply what the 猫的天空之城 cafes are called in English and not any kind of transliteration?

Oo-roo! --Shirt58 (talk) 07:24, 22 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hi!shirt58 I'm sorry ,I didn't see your message until now for I'm busy these days.

I'm so happy and thankful that you can leave a message for me.I have been very distressed these days for my article being deleted for so many times, but I really want to introduce it to everyone because it really deserves to visit and I'm not advertising. This cafe is very popular now and Suzhou is also my hometown and I want to introduce something interesting instead of the places of interest.But, you see, I failed for so many times. It depressed me so much.

So, can you help me with my article? I don't know how to change it and I have changed many points that I think are like advertising but wiki still think it's like an advertisement. Should I say more about the postcard wall and delete something to make the postcard wall outstanding?

As for your question, momi is an way of calling cats in China. In chinese, we call cats maomi(猫咪), and momi is similar to maomi. Actually, this shop is also famous for 2 cats. And the English name of maodetiankongzhicheng is Momi Cafe which is translated by the shopkeeper maybe and I don't see other ways of translating until now.

Hayao Miyazaki has published a series of comic which is also called maodetiankongzhicheng but I think there's no relationship with the Momi Cafe, just the same name.

And you can search many things on the Internet about Momi Cafe because the cafe's shopkeeper designs many little things such as postcards pendants by himself and maybe he also sells them online or someone elso makes something similar to make money.

finally, I'm really thankful that you can give me some suggestions and pay attention to my articles.

NNU-12-22100555 (talk) 17:05, 23 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Quick response - thanks for your reply, NNU-12-22100555! (NB: My personal policy about responding to any WP:NNU contributor is to use completely colloquial English. Which IMO is one very important aspect of the whole NNU project. Your mileage may vary.)

Hey, I've had articles I added to en.wikipedia.org deleted, and I'm a "native speaker" of English. It's no big problem. Please don't let the previous deletions put you off contributing. Need to go to sleep and wake up for work, so I can't fully address this.

One thing: if you could you possibly start an article along the lines of zh.wikipedia.org, that would most helpful indeed.

--Shirt58 (talk) 15:32, 25 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Kunshi

Dear student, I have had a look a your article Kunchi. I have not yet a full review, but want to give some starting comments/ask some questions:

you did not mention what it was. Is it a type of rock? Are you sure there is not English name for it that already has a page?
You should make links (like this: donald Duck)
Format your article with headings (with ==, just press edit in the screen of the page, and you'll how I did it)
To get an idea about the vocabulary needed to write geological articles, try some of the articles in Category:Dolomite (rock) for inspiration.

Questions? Let me know at my talk page! good luck wiht the article, L.tak (talk) 18:16, 3 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Proposed deletion of Momi cafe

The article Momi cafe has been proposed for deletion because of the following concern:

Article about a chain of coffee houses. No evidence provided to show the chain is notable

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Please consider improving the article to address the issues raised. Removing {{proposed deletion/dated}} will stop the proposed deletion process, but other deletion processes exist. In particular, the speedy deletion process can result in deletion without discussion, and articles for deletion allows discussion to reach consensus for deletion. Sparthorse (talk) 15:57, 20 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]