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Your submission at Articles for creation: Laukoa Santos (February 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Greenman was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines for sports persons and athletes). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Does not yet appear to meet WP:NFOOTY. WP:TOOSOON?

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Greenman (talk) 15:08, 23 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Laukoa Santos (March 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Greenman was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines for sports persons and athletes). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Player still does not appear to meet the criteria. "Players who have played [...] in a competitive game between two teams from fully professional leagues."

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Greenman (talk) 20:16, 25 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Greenman,

Laukoa has played for the Portland Timbers u23 in 10 league matches scoring 2 goals, Timbers U23 plays in the USL 2 which is a semi professional league in the United States. From there he finished his college career at SDSU and signed a contract with Charlotte FC making 2 pre season appearances in the Carolina Challenge Cup against the Columbus Crew of the MLS. Laukoa is also the first Hawaiian player to ever play in the PAC 12. He is also mentioned on Charlotte FCs Wikipedia page under the current roster tab. Charlotte FC - Wikipedia

I think Laukoas page should be reconsidered as he more then definitely meets the requirements of what a professional footballer is.

Thanks RatKing26 (talk) 20:52, 9 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Laukoa Santos

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 21:02, 25 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: DAB Motors (September 22)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DoubleGrazing was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

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DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:27, 22 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:DAB Motors

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A tag has been placed on Draft:DAB Motors, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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Your submission at Articles for creation: DAB Motors (November 7)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Vanderwaalforces were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)
reliable
secondary
strictly independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Remove the external links in the prose and use them in the == External links == section or remove them entirely. There is little promo issue, a noteworthy collaboration with Peugeot Motorcycles' extensive experience in the motorcycle industry. is promotional.

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Vanderwaalforces (talk) 07:52, 7 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:DAB Motors

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 12:06, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]