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Your submission at Articles for creation: Vineet Bhatia (August 7)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LittlePuppers was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

See eg. the entire "Early Life" section.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Vineet Bhatia, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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LittlePuppers (talk) 16:54, 7 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Ronbhat24! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! LittlePuppers (talk) 16:54, 7 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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--Gryllida (talk) 23:35, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Re: Draft:Vineet Bhatia

Hello Ronbhat24 I have added projects Biography, India, Business, to your article. You may wish to join them, check their to-do, and meet new people with interest in these topics. ( To reply click "edit" next to this section, and add your reply at the end. ) Cheers, --Gryllida (talk) 23:35, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Re: quicker draft creation

I'm running an experiment draft creation procedure that I think may be quicker. It is documented here.

Would you like to participate? To confirm, click 'edit' next to this section heading, and write 'Yes --~~~~' at the end, then click publish changes. Thanks, -Gryllida (talk) 23:54, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Yes --Ronbhat24 (talk) 23:57, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Step 1: list sources individually

Hi, thanks for volunteering to participate in this unofficial experiment. Please fill in the list below and let me know when it is completed. Thanks. --Gryllida (talk) 23:59, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

1. Fuhrmeister, Chris (November 20, 2018). "Empire-Building Chef Vineet Bhatia Is the Indian Cuisine Expert on 'The Final Table'". Eater.

What it says about article subject: Article highlighting hit new Netflix Original, The Final Table, which features Vineet as a judge.

Facts: Vineet played a judge in The Final Table, that was in Netflix.

2. "Vineet Bhatia wins second Michelin star". The Caterer. November 18, 2009.

What it says about article subject: Article showing Vineet winning 2nd Michelin Star and becoming first Indian Chef to have both a star in UK and abroad.

Facts: Vineet won 2nd Michelin Star and became first Indian Chef to have both a star in UK and abroad.

3. "Vineet Bhatia and his Indian food revolution". Tried & Supplied. May 28, 2017.

What it says about article subject: A blog about Vineet's rise in the culinary world

Facts: ... (please specify ) ...

4. "Stars in their eyes". the Guardian. January 26, 2005.

What it says about article subject: Vineet Bhatia leaving Zaika to pursue his own venture

Facts: In year ... (please specify) ..., Vineet left Zaika to create his own company.

5. "The Seven Sins of Vineet Bhatia - Chef Patron, Rasoi". www.thecriticsguide.com.

What it says about article subject: Informal conversation interview with Vineet Bhatia

Facts: ... (please specify )...

6. "Saffron Lounge by Vineet Bhatia , Doha - West Bay Reviews | Indian cuisine, Restaurants". Time Out Doha.

What it says about article subject: Qatari restaurant

Facts: ... (please clarify ...) ...

7. "Maharaja by Vineet presents a fascinating business lunch". Arab News. January 25, 2015.

What it says about article subject: Saudi Arabian restaruance

Facts: ... (please clarify ...) ...

8. "Maharaja by Vineet Scoops 'Best Indian Restaurant'". April 11, 2017.

What it says about article subject: Saudia Arabian restaurant accolade

Facts: ... (please clarify ...) ...

9. "London Diary: Two great Indian chefs bounce back with terrific new restaurants after falling out with their partners". Hindustan Times. October 2, 2019.

What it says about article subject: KAMA in Harrods opening

Facts: ... (please clarify ...) ...

10. O’Loughlin, Marina. "Restaurant review: Marina O'Loughlin on Kama by Vineet, Harrods, London" – via www.thetimes.co.uk.

What it says about article subject: Restaurant opening in Harrods

Facts: ... (please clarify , what year, where is Harrods, what did article subject do there, ...) ...

11. "Twist of taste with Vineet Bhatia is back!". The New Indian Express.

What it says about article subject: TV Show launch, Twist of Taste, aired and shot in India

Facts: ... (please clarify year, article subject role in that...) ...

Step 2: identify sources type

Source type: (a) detailed coverage (b) a passing mention (c) directory listing

Source reliability: (d) anyone can post like a blog (e) peer reviewed or otherwise curated professionally (f) social media (g) some form of review, but not necessarily by an expert

Source independency: (h) official website (i) interview (j) a local newspaper (k) an international newspaper or a book or a publication in this specific topic (l) a general topic newspaper

Analysis: (m) none present, only a re-tell of facts (n) some analysis (o) deep analysis

Example: "aej" would mean "detailed coverage in a peer reviewed source at a local newspaper"

Please write:

1 agkn 2 bgkm 3 agin 4 bgln 5 agim 6 bekn 7 beln 8 beln 9 aekn 10 bekn 11 aeln

Done. What are steps 3 and 4? Also can you explain how this will improve the article and how you and this trial will help me get this article published successfully?

Speedy deletion nomination of Vineet Bhatia

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Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. This is a notice that Vineet Bhatia, a page that you created, has been tagged for deletion. This has been done under two or more of the criteria for speedy deletion, by which pages can be deleted at any time, without discussion. If the page meets any of these strictly-defined criteria, then it may soon be deleted by an administrator. The reasons it has been tagged are:

It seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. (See section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion.) Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.
It covers a topic on which we already have an article - Draft:Vineet Bhatia. (See section A10 of the criteria for speedy deletion.) Please note that this is not a comment on you personally and we hope you will continue helping to improve Wikipedia. If the topic of the article you created is one that interests you, then perhaps you would like to help out at Draft:Vineet Bhatia, or to discuss new information at [[Talk:Draft:Vineet Bhatia|the article's talk page]].

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator, or if you have already done so, you can place a request here. Captain Calm (talk) 22:24, 16 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Vineet Bhatia (October 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Robert McClenon were:

Thank you for your submission, but the subject of this article already exists in Wikipedia. You can find it and improve it at Vineet Bhatia instead.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Two copies of this page have been created, in draft space and in article space. It is not necessary to create two copies of the same page, and it annoys the reviewers. This is sometimes done in order to bypass Articles for Creation review. However, if a submitter is ready to have the article in article space, it can be moved into article space, rather than creating a copy. It is common for a page that has been duplicated in draft space and in article space to be nominated for deletion or proposed for deletion.

If the article is kept, this draft should be redirected to the article. If the article is deleted, this draft may be kept for future improvement.

This page appears to have been written to praise its subject rather than to describe the subject neutrally. Wikipedia is written from a neutral point of view.

If this draft is resubmitted without being reworked, it may be nominated for deletion. You may ask for advice about the tone of articles at the Teahouse.

Does the author of this draft have any sort of financial or other connection with the subject of this draft? Please read the conflict of interest policy and the paid editing policy and make any required declarations.

You may ask for advice about conflict of interest at the Teahouse.

If this draft is resubmitted without addressing the question about conflict of interest, it may be Rejected or nominated for deletion.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Vineet Bhatia and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Vineet Bhatia, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Robert McClenon (talk) 01:17, 17 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]