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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Jason Fernandes. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 17:13, 4 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jason Fernandes (January 10)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Paul Carpenter were:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The issues of tone and inline external links are bad enough but currently a lot of the references are just links to homepages rather than to items actually supporting the statements, even a lot of those are self published - one is literally just an instagram account. Is this individual more notable than any other chronic TEDx'er? I don't know, but if he is then the article does not establish it.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Paul ❬talk❭ 10:46, 10 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Shrie95! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Paul ❬talk❭ 10:46, 10 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to the submission and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to the submission, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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Shrie95 (talk) 07:12, 16 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Jason Fernandes Article has been not approved, I have done the suggested changes and the links have been revised as well, please do let me know if there is anything else apart from that since I am still a novice.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jason Fernandes (January 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Chicdat were:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Jason Fernandes and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Jason Fernandes, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

🐔 Chicdat ^{Bawk to me!} 13:24, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Venus Remedies Limited

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A tag has been placed on Venus Remedies Limited, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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Hello, I'm Deb. I wanted to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions have been undone because they appeared to be promotional. Advertising and using Wikipedia as a "soapbox" are against Wikipedia policy and not permitted; Wikipedia articles should be written objectively, using independent sources, and from a neutral perspective. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about Wikipedia. Thank you.

What is your connection with Jason Fernandes outside Wikipedia? Deb (talk) 11:41, 2 May 2021 (UTC) Hello, Shrie95. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. We ask that you:[reply]

avoid editing or creating articles about yourself, your family, friends, colleagues, company, organization or competitors;
propose changes on the talk pages of affected articles (you can use the {{request edit}} template);
disclose your conflict of interest when discussing affected articles (see Wikipedia:Conflict of interest#How to disclose a COI);
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In addition, you are required by the Wikimedia Foundation's terms of use to disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation. See Wikipedia:Paid-contribution disclosure.

Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you.Deb (talk) 11:39, 2 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Deb, About Venus Remedies Limited, yes, I am connected to the company. I wanted to publish the article on Wikipedia as it was not created, and many people search about the brand on the internet. Venus Remedies Limited is a public listed company and one of the major pharmaceutical companies in the world to tackle Antimicrobial Resistance (AMR) and manufacturers of significant antibiotics to 64+ nations across the globe. The content I communicated about Venus Remedies Limited has no intention to promote; instead, the information let the audience know more about the brand and its history. Venus Remedies Limited will be releasing most of the financial data, collaborations, and three decades of detailed history by Q3 of 2021.

I referred to several Wikipedia pages of similar brands and put up the required reference link. Again, the article we submitted is unbiased /general information about the company. If you feel we need to make some changes, kindly suggest to me how to do it.

Thank you.Shrie95 (talk) 05:55, 10 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Venus Remedies Limited

Hi Deb, About Venus Remedies Limited, yes, I am connected to the company. I wanted to publish the article on Wikipedia as it was not created, and many people search about the brand on the internet. Venus Remedies Limited is a public listed company and one of the major pharmaceutical companies in the world to tackle Antimicrobial Resistance (AMR) and manufacturers of significant antibiotics to 64+ nations across the globe. The content I communicated about Venus Remedies Limited has no intention to promote; instead, the information let the audience know more about the brand and its history. Venus Remedies Limited will be releasing most of the financial data, collaborations, and three decades of detailed history by Q3 of 2021.

I referred to several Wikipedia pages of similar brands and put up the required reference link. Again, the article we submitted is unbiased /general information about the company. If you feel we need to make some changes, kindly suggest to me how to do it.

Thank you.Shrie95 (talk) 08:09, 7 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Venus Remedies Limited moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, Venus Remedies Limited, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. DJRSD (talk) 11:05, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Jason Fernandes

Hello, Shrie95. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Jason Fernandes, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Draft space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for article space.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 20:01, 3 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Jason Fernandes

Hello, Shrie95. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Jason Fernandes".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 19:36, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Venus Remedies Limited

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 12:01, 17 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]