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Your submission at Articles for creation: The History & Development of Corporate & Business Aviation (January 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Perryprog were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please also note that Wikipedia cannot accept material copied from somewhere else—I can't tell if that's the case here, but I do want to make sure you're aware of this requirement.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Perryprog (talk) 13:43, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Thomasjames00125! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Perryprog (talk) 13:43, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: The History & Development of Corporate & Business Aviation (February 2)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by AngusWOOF were:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

Thank you for your submission, but the subject of this article already exists in Wikipedia. You can find it and improve it at Corporate aviation instead.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This reads like it was intended to be an inside essay to submit to a company and not something suitable for Wikipedia. We already have articles on Business aviation and Corporate aviation.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:The History & Development of Corporate & Business Aviation and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:The History & Development of Corporate & Business Aviation, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 19:05, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Overlinking

Hi Thomasjames00125 - I have reverted a few of your edits, such as at Theatre of India and Mandarin Oriental, Bangkok, for overlinking - so I have come to explain the reason.
As explained at ‎ WP:OVERLINKING we only link the first use of a term in an article, and we do not normally link:-

Everyday words understood by most readers.
Names familiar to most readers, including;- major countries, major cities, major languages, major nationalities/ethnicities and major religions
Common units of measurement and dates

There are many articles where these are already, incorrectly, linked; however, China, Russia and India are clearly major countries, so should not be linked - Thanks - Arjayay (talk) 17:11, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:The History & Development of Corporate & Business Aviation

Hello, Thomasjames00125. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:The History & Development of Corporate & Business Aviation, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Draft space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for article space.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion under CSD G13. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it. You may request userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 20:01, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:The History & Development of Corporate & Business Aviation

Hello, Thomasjames00125. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "The History & Development of Corporate & Business Aviation".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 19:16, 2 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]