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@WIPhysics: Nice start on your article. I made a few edits aimed at formatting

  • References go after punctuation, not before.
  • Section header should use sentence capitalization, not title capitalization. Only the first word (and any proper nouns) should be capitalized.
  • I also converted "Professor of Physics" to lower case. While an actual title might be capitalized ("is the [Named] Professor of Physics at [Institution]"), as a general job title it isn't.
  • I also changed "She" to "Evdokimov" in the "Education" section. At least the first time in a section, you should use the person's name.

The other thing is sourcing. You should really find some independent sources if you at all can. While things like h-index can be used as proxies from notability, they're always a little subject to interpretation and debate. Independent third-party sources are much better in that regard. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:01, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the feedback and editing Ian. Its appreciated. I was slow in responding but I think I am there now. I added some references to papers on which she was a key author. Hopefully that is sufficient to prove she is "notable" along with her being elected Council Chair on a major international experiment and serving on NSAC the advisory committee to the DoE and NSF.

WIPhysics (talk) 17:36, 21 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]