User talk:Xhananexx
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Re:Completing the training
[edit]Good job! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:33, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
re: Articles for Social Development & Collective Intelligence in Practice
[edit]Those are good choices from the theoretical perspective (important sociological topics) but the article on Prostitution in South Korea is already reasonably developed. The article on Crime in South Korea is less so but still I think it would be easier if you selected other topics. If you are interested in such topics, one I'd suggest would be Drug policy of South Korea (example to base your article on: Drug policy of Sweden). For our project, we have to select articles that are either missing or very short (2-3 paragraphs at most). For example, here's a related article that should be expanded: Law enforcement in South Korea (compare to Law enforcement in Japan). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 09:54, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
- Racism in South Korea is a difficult (controversial) topic but it is certainly in need of expansion. You can work on this, but keep in mind you will need to cite mainly scholarly sources, and not newspapers. But yes, it's a good topic and you can add it to your dashboard. The Freedom of religion in North Korea on the other hand may be difficult to expand much, so I am worried that if you chose this project you will find it difficult to add much to that article, so I'd suggest a different second topic. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:58, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
- Yes, both Law enforcement in South Korea and Drug policy of South Korea are still available. Please add the selected topics to the dashboard when you make your final choice.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:56, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
Drug policy of south korea moved to draftspace
[edit]An article you recently created, Drug policy of south korea, does not have enough sources and citations as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. GPL93 (talk) 14:38, 26 April 2020 (UTC)
re: Assignment deadline 3
[edit]Good job adding a reference, but to complete the assignment you should do it in a real article. You will still get full credit, don't worry about being late - just try to find unreferenced content in a real article and reference it there. Good luck, --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:06, 27 April 2020 (UTC)
Weekly 10 edits
[edit]Please make sure to make your weekly 10 edits for the Collective Intelligence class. As a reminder, if you miss your weekly edits, your score will be lowered by 1 point. But don't worry, you can easily get extra points by making extra edits for extra credit (each 10 extra edits will add another point to your score on average). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 10:44, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
Adding references
[edit]Good start, but you need to be more careful. I had to remove your reference from here, as the book you cite is not reliable. If you look at the introduction of the book, the author admits he copied stuff from Wikipedia. We cannot accept such a source due to WP:CITOGENESIS. Please watch the video on reliable sources which should explain this in more detail. The additional minor error is that you did not cite the page you refer to (which page of the book discusses the 2nd Siberian Army Corps)?. But the good news is, you were able to correctly format the reference, so your coding skills are good.
Regarding your second edit, [1], you found and properly formatted a reliable source, but it is unclear which part of the article is your reference for? Your reference should be added to the end of a sentence, whose facts you are referencing. Please move your reference to the appropriate part of the article (end of a sentence you have verified with the source found). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:11, 1 May 2020 (UTC)
Feedback on your project for Collective Intelligence class
[edit]User:Xhananexx/Law enforcement in South Korea is an early draft and I can't provide much feedback to you at this point except encouraging you to finish it ASAP and then request me to review it again. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:22, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
- Expansion of Law enforcement in South Korea is a good start but you should add more information. Several paragraphs of history, for example (see Law_enforcement_in_Poland#History) would be very helpful. More pictures from Wikimedia Commons would be nice too. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:49, 21 June 2020 (UTC)
Feedback on your project for Social Development class
[edit]Regarding Draft:Drug policy of south korea, please see above. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:09, 5 June 2020 (UTC)
- I have reviewed your article based on the warning below, and I concur that most of the article is simply based on content copied from other sources. See WP:COPYPASTE. Changng a few words is not sufficient. You are required to write the text in your own words, with only minimal quotations. Please try again. Also, please reference every paragraph or sentence if necessary with inline citations. Right now all your footnotes are clustered at the bottom, and one does not know which part of the article comes from which source. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 01:11, 16 June 2020 (UTC)
Hello professor,
That's correct! My mistake, I will not copy anymore. Xhananexx (talk) 01:22, 16 June 2020 (UTC)
- Good :) Please add the WP:LEAD abstract/summary to the top of the article and ensure all paragraphs have a reference. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:45, 21 June 2020 (UTC)
Speedy deletion nomination of Drug policy of south korea
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Speedy deletion nomination of Drug policy of South Korea
[edit]If this is the first article that you have created, you may want to read the guide to writing your first article.
You may want to consider using the Article Wizard to help you create articles.
A tag has been placed on Drug policy of South Korea requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G12 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page appears to be an unambiguous copyright infringement. This page appears to be a direct copy from https://seoulz.com/a-korean-startup-needs-to-capitalize-on-cbd-oil-in-korea/. For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images taken from other web sites or printed material, and as a consequence, your addition will most likely be deleted. You may use external websites or other printed material as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences. This part is crucial: say it in your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing.
If the external website or image belongs to you, and you want to allow Wikipedia to use the text or image — which means allowing other people to use it for any reason — then you must verify that externally by one of the processes explained at Wikipedia:Donating copyrighted materials. The same holds if you are not the owner but have their permission. If you are not the owner and do not have permission, see Wikipedia:Requesting copyright permission for how you may obtain it. You might want to look at Wikipedia's copyright policy for more details, or ask a question here.
If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 17:05, 13 July 2020 (UTC)