Wikipedia:Featured article review/Multiple sclerosis/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was delisted by Nikkimaria via FACBot (talk) 0:16, 8 November 2020 (UTC) [1].

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Multiple sclerosis

Notified: Doc James, Jfdwolff, Garrondo, WPMED, WP Neuroscience, WP Disability

Review section

This is a 2005 promotion that has not been maintained and whose principal author (Garrondo) has not edited since 2013. Problems have been detailed on talk since July 29, 2020. A top-to-bottom overhaul is needed for this article which receives 5,000 daily views! Besides the datedness, there are stubby sentences throughout, suggesting piecemeal additions over time ...many of which are now dated “as of” sentences. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 15:54, 9 October 2020 (UTC)

Move to FARC, zero interest, zero activity, nothing happening, even with mention at WPMED multiple times well before the nomination. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 14:50, 20 October 2020 (UTC)

FARC section

Issues raised in the review section include datedness and prose. Nikkimaria (talk) 12:55, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

• Delist. Tagged for specifically marked weasel-words, unsourced statements since July 2020, and in need of updating from September 2015. DrKay (talk) 10:47, 31 October 2020 (UTC)
• Delist per above. Femke Nijsse (talk) 12:30, 1 November 2020 (UTC)
• Closing note: This removal candidate has been delisted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please leave the {{featured article review}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Nikkimaria (talk) 00:16, 8 November 2020 (UTC)

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