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02:20:50, 25 June 2022 review of draft by 67.241.60.112

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Can you help me fix my article? Whenever i save a change for adding footnotes it reverses it back. I need some help.

67.241.60.112 (talk) 02:20, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Please don't waste everyone's time with such silliness, not here, not at the Teahouse. Thank you. --DoubleGrazing (talk) 05:17, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Deleted as hoax David notMD (talk) 10:20, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

04:36:20, 25 June 2022 review of submission by 206.84.231.9

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206.84.231.9 (talk) 04:36, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

What is your question? The draft has been rejected and will no longer be considered. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 05:30, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

06:52:48, 25 June 2022 review of submission by Deepesh Bhatnagar

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Deepesh Bhatnagar (talk) 06:52, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply] 

why the edit of page is not accepted
Your draft Draft:Navya Bhatnagar has no sources so was declined. Theroadislong (talk) 06:55, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

12:29:28, 25 June 2022 review of submission by KnucklesTheTigger

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Please don't reject my draft, give me a second chance. This time I will not keep re-submitting it over and over again without any changes. But how must I find foreign sources when I live in the US? KnucklesTheTigger (talk) 12:29, 25 June 2022 (UTC):Correctly rejected, the sources are garbage, Facebook, Linkedin.com etc. Theroadislong (talk) 12:42, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

16:30:39, 25 June 2022 review of submission by AnAnonymous10

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Hello, I made changes to strengthen notability for the article including adding the magazine's focus on underrepresented black artists via NJ.com, further mentions by Cosmopolitan magazine about features, and a New York Post article discussing rising actor Jaeden Martell that was a significant feature for the actor and appeared in Rain Magazine. If this is not sufficient to establish notability, I ask the editors to please point me in the right direction. Thank you AnAnonymous10 (talk) 16:30, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @AnAnonymous10, what are your three best sources in the article in terms of notability? Justiyaya 16:41, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Justiyaya, Thank you for writing!
I would say:
1. New York Public Library establishes that it is a notable title included in its archives: [1]
2. Bal Harbour magazine, which seems reputable (100,000 print circulation) has a two page print spread on the magazine and its founder. [2]
3. An interview I found with renown artist Julie Mehretu on the Marian Goodman website seemed like a notable source: [3]
Additional mentions include quotes that designers, musicians and actors gave to Rain and were published in well regarded outlets such as Elle, MSN, NJ.com, The Cut, and Cosmopolitan magazine.
Thanks again for your help AnAnonymous10 (talk) 18:00, 25 June 2022 (UTC) AnAnonymous10 (talk) 18:00, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
That the NYPL holds the magazine does not establish notability. 331dot (talk) 18:06, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
The third source looks either non-independent or lacks significant coverage to me. Passing mentions does not count towards notability. Sorry, but I don't think the subject is notable. Justiyaya 17:06, 26 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks @331dot@Justiyaya That makes sense the NYPL does not establish notability. The third source seems like a well-respected and notable art gallery Marian Goodman. They represent Julie Mehretu. It looks like the Rain magazine press article link is about Julie's mid-career retrospective at Whitney Museum: https://whitney.org/exhibitions/julie-mehretu I don't think that is only a passing mention. Do you disagree? Thank you! AnAnonymous10 (talk) 20:56, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@AnAnonymous10 I cannot find any mention of "Rain" in the website that you linked, are you sure you linked the right website? Sources also needs to be independent of the subject, which this source is probably not. Justiyaya 05:13, 28 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Hi @Justiyaya
Yes, the website is Marian Goodman in their press section. The interview for Rain featured on Marian Goodman is here and you can see they have a cover with the magazine name Rain. It also appears on the magazine's website. I can see how it may not be an independent source since it is an art gallery. Therefore, I located an independent source, a museum, that cites the interview on the blog of the Seattle Art Museum (here). AnAnonymous10 (talk) 17:50, 29 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@AnAnonymous10 I still do not think that this source is really better than the other one. The entire page mentions the subject twice both being in the references section. Justiyaya 03:06, 30 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, thank you @Justiyaya I give up on this article for now. I can't seem to locate better independent sources on the web. AnAnonymous10 (talk) 18:51, 30 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^
    "Rain". New York Public Library. Retrieved 2022-06-19.
  2. ^ "Bal Harbour magazine ("Make It Rain")". Bal Harbour Magazine via issuu. 2018-09-10. Retrieved 2022-06-14.
  3. ^ "Julie Mehretu Press" (PDF). Marian Goodman. Retrieved 2022-06-14.

17:58:06, 25 June 2022 review of submission by BevoLJ

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Hello, I recently drafted a page. When I was finished I moved it to the main space. There is a banner at the top and I am unsure if it is telling me I made a mistake or not.

It is from {{AfC submission|t||ts=20220624120625|u=BevoLJ|ns=118|demo=}}.

I do not want to remove this because I am not a reviewer, and it was myself that made the page. However, I do not fully understand what it is trying to tell me, or if I have made some type of mistake. Any help or guidance is greatly appreciated! --BevoLJ (talk) 17:58, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

For clarity, please note I am not asking about the {{Copy edit|date=}} banner. I added that myself asking for help from contributors. It is the one above that I am asking about. BevoLJ (talk) 18:15, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
The idea of AFC is that you submit the draft for review, but you bypassed this process and moved it to main space, much of the content is not in an appropriate tone and has been removed. Theroadislong (talk) 18:59, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@BevoLJ Did you take the picture that is in the article, yourself, with your own camera? It looks like a professionally shot picture. 71.228.112.175 (talk) 06:09, 29 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, no. I used the crop tool on wikicommons of another file on wikicommons. You will need to speak to the author of the file I cropped. Sorry. BevoLJ (talk) 08:56, 29 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@BevoLJ I am not sure how to properly attribute that, but you marked it as (your) "own work". That generally means that you took the picture. You should ask at Commons how to attribute the picture (you need to make sure it's properly attributed). Good luck. 71.228.112.175 (talk) 04:47, 30 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

19:29:05, 25 June 2022 review of submission by Adam arker

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FAISSAL HAMOUNI successfull young Moroccan entrepreneur, born in Morocco/Casablanca

Adam arker (talk) 19:29, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Adam arker: what is your question? The draft has been rejected, and won't be considered anymore. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 19:35, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Adam arker For future info, you should read WP:YFA to understand how hard it is to write an article, especially if there are no sources demonstrating the subject's notability. TechnoTalk (talk) 23:29, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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