Talk:The Hockey Stick Illusion

Tidy up

I've done an intial tidy up. Does anyone have a hard copy of the book? One will no doubt be needed to expand the synopsis and add a few refs. Also, there don't seem to be many crit refs, so those need to be found to give the crit section some balance. This definitely has potential though. Jprw (talk) 16:20, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

I have the book, refs are in it can be seen on amazon on the back flap of the book. Try as i did i could find no crit`s of the book at all, Cla looked in infotrac and found none either mark nutley (talk) 16:55, 3 April 2010 (UTC)

I've looked through the first few pages of Google and also drew a blank. Where's George Monbiot when you need him? Nowtin The Guardian Jprw (talk) 07:19, 4 April 2010 (UTC)

• The references need to be formatted better, with author, publication, publisher, and date published, if available. If its from the web, the retrieval date needs to be noted. Cla68 (talk) 07:54, 4 April 2010 (UTC)

The ref`s have publisher, date retrieved, and publisher. I dunno how to have the author and publication show as well? mark nutley (talk) 08:51, 4 April 2010 (UTC)

Use the citation templates. They will put the information into a standardized format. Cla68 (talk) 11:22, 4 April 2010 (UTC)

I've just done the one for Matt Ridley -- that can serve as a template. Jprw (talk) 11:11, 4 April 2010 (UTC)

There`s a template? mark nutley (talk) 15:44, 4 April 2010 (UTC)

Take your pick or just copy the one I used. Jprw (talk) 16:32, 4 April 2010 (UTC)

I have asked a few people from the peer review thingy to look over this article in the hopes of getting it up to FA status :-) mark nutley (talk) 15:53, 4 April 2010 (UTC)

Major problems would include (a) Amazon reviews are pretty meaningless and shouldn't be used in articles, and (b) dust-jacket blurbs are, by their very nature, promotional. The only sources independent of the book are the Ridley and Gilder reviews. And the Gilder review is basically a blog post from a source that has a history of being unreliable. Guettarda (talk) 05:58, 6 April 2010 (UTC)

Andrew Bolt ref

Andrew e-mailed me and let me know the Andrew Bolt ref is actually about "Caspar and the Jesus Paper" not the book, so i have removed it mark nutley (talk) 19:41, 5 April 2010 (UTC)

Amazon refs

I think we need to get rid of the Amazon refs and reference the book directly. Jprw (talk) 07:01, 6 April 2010 (UTC)

You mean the refs from the back flap? mark nutley (talk) 10:21, 6 April 2010 (UTC)

All of them -- if you've got the book, use the book. If they're from the back flap, try to use the original sources. Jprw (talk) 11:44, 6 April 2010 (UTC)

Although I cannot find where this originally appeared. Jprw (talk) 11:50, 6 April 2010 (UTC)

I'm guessing the book was sent to him for review and that was his response. I could always e-mail Andrew to ask if needed mark nutley (talk) 12:37, 6 April 2010 (UTC)

It's an interesting question -- if you're in touch with him why not ask. Jprw (talk) 13:02, 6 April 2010 (UTC)

It is as i suspected, it was a pre-publication preview, why did you want to know btw? mark nutley (talk) 18:57, 6 April 2010 (UTC)

Okay, not used to those -- was just interested in the source. Jprw (talk) 12:33, 7 April 2010 (UTC)

Amazon reviews

Please don't post the results of Amazon reviews unless they are pointed out by some secondary sources as being worth of notice. They are a) anonymous b) not from recognized authors c) easily manipulable (*).

I note that Amazon doesn't seem to have any meaningful editorial control of review quality, so these reviews should count as self-published sources.

(*) They can even be manipulated inadvertently. For example, when someone posts in a sympathetic mailing list about a new listing, and many people in the list independently decide to make a positive review. This means that there will be more reviews than usual, that there will be a higher proportion of favourable reviews, and that the first few reviews will all be highly favourable. Another case, some people will remember back when all reviews were anonymous, and Amazon accidentally displayed the author names for a few hours, and a lot of the very positive reviews turned out to be written by the editors of the books, or by editorial staff from the book publishers. (I am not saying that this happened in this case, it's just examples of the easy manipulability of Amazon reviews.)

--Enric Naval (talk) 11:22, 9 April 2010 (UTC)

Introduction

Not sure what Wikipedia style is on this, but I would write the book's name as "Title": "Subtitle" rather than Title (Subtitle). I left it for now... does anyone know the Wikipedia style on this?--Jp07 (talk) 17:22, 7 April 2010 (UTC)

Also... who is Phillip Bratby? This is especially important to discuss since there is no article on him. What is the Climategate inquiry? What committee members? What's in Chapter 15? Is this paragraph important enough to be in the introduction? I suggest this be placed in a "Trivia" section at the end of the article if it is not to be omitted.--Jp07 (talk) 17:33, 7 April 2010 (UTC)

[Bratby] mark nutley (talk) 18:16, 7 April 2010 (UTC)

Background

Which political blog was Andrew Montford looking at?--Jp07 (talk) 17:34, 7 April 2010 (UTC)

Paragraph One: What does "replication" mean? That is a potentially libelous statement until you clarify that -- it might be interpreted as "plagiarism." That's how I read it because I don't know anything about this. I'm taking it down for now... See the history when you're ready to add it back, clarified. This is kind of important if you don't want to be sued. Also, who is Caspar Ammann, and how do you spell his name? What antics involved in keeping whose paper alive? What science do visitors need to be educated on?

Paragraph Two: What were the first steps in writing his book? --Jp07 (talk) 17:49, 7 April 2010 (UTC)

Caspar Ammann is a climatologist, and that is how you spell his name :), The replication is about Ammann`s paper, which he said reproduced Mann`s work. There was a lot of jigary pokery by the IPCC to ensure the paper could be used by them so they could also continue to use Mann`s hockey stick graph. Thats the short version. His results also failed btw as he used the same proxies as Mann had, ie Bristlecone Pine which are no good for reconstructions. mark nutley (talk) 18:15, 7 April 2010 (UTC)(edit conflict)

Speaking of IPCC... who are they? Try to avoid acronyms to enhance clarity.--Jp07 (talk) 00:35, 8 April 2010 (UTC)

Dunno what blog he was looking at, i can ask him if needed Same for paragraph two mark nutley (talk) 18:17, 7 April 2010 (UTC)

Synopsis

My previous comment on potentially libelous statements also applies to "reproduce" here. Distinguish this from "plagiarism," if applicable, please. If you do discuss instances of court determined plagiarism anywhere in this document, you need to cite a court case or you're risking a court case of your own. You cannot discuss plagiarism at all if a court has not called it plagiarism... unless you want to be sued. I'm going to remove this sentence for now as well. --Jp07 (talk) 17:57, 7 April 2010 (UTC)

Same comment applies to "reconstruction." You can fix all of these things by referring to the history, when you get a chance. --Jp07 (talk) 18:00, 7 April 2010 (UTC)

Reception

George Gilder's quote is a bit large and unwieldy for this article. I suggest you paraphrase it or pick out the most important part... especially with all of the jargon. Here's a hint: newspapers are written at the fifth-grade level. I suggest you write for Wikipedia in the same manner. Not necessarily because the readers are incapable of understanding, but if it takes too much work to dissect a piece of writing, most people will skip it. You want it to be easy for the average reader to extract the meaning. To be honest, I just skimmed the quote.--Jp07 (talk) 00:16, 8 April 2010 (UTC)

Same thing applies to Booker's quote.--Jp07 (talk) 00:16, 8 April 2010 (UTC)

Actually, Booker's quote is probably OK. I suggest that you break it up into two sentences, though. Write it like this:

"Blah blah blah ... pauses," Booker said. "Second half of statement blah blah blah."

Then you'll be good. --Jp07 (talk) 00:20, 8 April 2010 (UTC)

General thoughts

OK -- so my copy edit is pretty much complete. I took care of all the minor fixes and did a little bit of restructuring and so forth to make it read better. I tried to identify all of the areas of confusion and omission; you want to try to answer as many of your readers questions as possible. As you proofread your writing, think: What questions could I ask here? Who, what, when, where, why and so what (a.k.a. who cares)? If any of this information is missing, do your best to work it in.

Also... what was the result of the findings? I'm not completely sure. I believe you're indicating that they found that popular opinion on climate change is incorrect and that it isn't that bad. I suggest you explicitly write this out, if that is the case. Try to eliminate any ambiguity there since the findings are arguably the most important part of this article. Honestly, you might ought to consider placing the findings in the first paragraph. See the inverted pyramid for guidance.

And my final note: I didn't check the spellings and capitalization of organizations, technical terms, names, etc. Make sure you look at this; if you get any of this wrong, it damages your credibility. The best way to determine this is to look at how the organization or person spells their own name. If you can't determine this with a reasonable amount of research, just try to make sure you stay consistent with your spelling and capitalization throughout the article.

Nice job, overall! I think you identified an article that was in need of writing and that was not being picked up. If you look at it from a marketing standpoint, that's great. You want to serve those underserved markets! Keep it up.--Jp07 (talk) 00:31, 8 April 2010 (UTC)

And by the way... I'll probably forget to come back and fix all of these things that I'm leaving you questions about, so you might want to address those on your own :). If you want another copy edit later, feel free to ask again, but I'm taking 17 hours this semester and I do plenty of research on my own... so I'll probably opt out on that portion, haha.--Jp07 (talk) 00:37, 8 April 2010 (UTC)

Problems?

This has the usual problems, but to begin: Criticisms of Ross McKitrick and Stephen McIntyre, as well as the ensuing hockey stick controversy, are also included in the book. - is that of supposed to be by? William M. Connolley (talk) 20:09, 8 April 2010 (UTC)

Your edit was blatant vandalism, refrain from doing such things again mark nutley (talk) 20:16, 8 April 2010 (UTC)

Oddly enough, I disagree. I've reverted you, of course. Also, please clearly mark your reverts as such William M. Connolley (talk) 20:22, 8 April 2010 (UTC)

It is vandalism and if you do not self revert i will do it for you. I have also left a warning on your talkpage. You have not ref`s for what you added, it is pure POV revert or i will and then file a request against you for your wp:disruptive editing mark nutley (talk) 20:29, 8 April 2010 (UTC)

Last chance: calling good faith edits vandalism is, at least in my view, incivil. Please redact your comments William M. Connolley (talk) 21:07, 8 April 2010 (UTC)

There is nothing good faith about your edit, it is vandalism to insert junk like that into an article. It is painfully obvious what you are doing here, you wish to make the article unstable s oit can`t go up for GA status mark nutley (talk) 21:10, 8 April 2010 (UTC)

You appear to be displaying a battleground mentality, and you've already been told that the edits are not vandalism. Your continued incivility makes a mockery of your civility parole. To pretend that this book has nothing negative at all to be said about it; and to evade the biases of all the positive reviews; clearly makes this article POV; I've tagged it as such William M. Connolley (talk) 21:26, 8 April 2010 (UTC)

And you are still being disruptive, i have looked at all the reviews and there is not one which is a bad review, stop being disruptive mark nutley (talk) 21:32, 8 April 2010 (UTC)

WMC: If you know of anything negative to be said about the book that can be properly sourced, feel free to add that. But you can't reasonably claim the book "has been ignored by everyone else [other than skeptics]" simply on the basis of your assumption that this book *must* be wrong because of the kind of people who like it and/or the kind of things it seems to be saying. It is not POV to summarize the reviews that *are* available. Yes, the people who first chose to read and review the book do tend to be the sort of people who like that sort of book. That will be the case for most books, on most topics. --Blogjack (talk) 07:24, 9 April 2010 (UTC)

You're right on the "of." My bad. What exactly are the "usual problems," though? And also, I do agree that some sourced negative reception needs to be recognized, but considering that this was only just published in March 2010, I think we will need to wait for a reputable critic to compose a negative reaction. I checked several databases and couldn't find anything ... negative or positive. Give it some time and address it when you can.--Jp07 (talk) 02:30, 9 April 2010 (UTC)

Exactly. The two additions by William M. Connolley (talk · contribs) here by inserting: "he book has been enthusiastically and uncritically reviewed by the skeptics, and ignored by everyone else." and again "The book has been enthusiastically and uncritically reviewed by the skeptics, and ignored by everyone else." is disruptive. He knows very well that such claims needs very sound and reliable sources to claim. Nsaa (talk) 14:11, 9 April 2010 (UTC)

It may be disruptive - i'll give no opinion on that. But it is correct, and even skeptics should have realized that by now. --Kim D. Petersen (talk) 14:33, 9 April 2010 (UTC)

Actually almost nothing in this article is based on "sound and reliable sources", as I pointed out days ago. "True but unsourced" is certainly better than "dubious and unsourced", which is the current state of much of the article. Guettarda (talk) 14:39, 9 April 2010 (UTC)

Per WP:WEIGHT, "it should always be clear which parts of the text describe the minority view, and that it is in fact a minority view. The majority view should be explained in sufficient detail that the reader may understand how the minority view differs from it, and controversies regarding parts of the minority view should be clearly identified and explained." This article presents an in-universe climate change denial position, it may be difficult finding sources specifically referring to it and showing the mainstream views of its claims, but it's necessary for NPOV. Carry on. . . dave souza, talk 23:02, 9 April 2010 (UTC)

Agree. In-universe is the correct description. (thank you for that one). --Kim D. Petersen (talk) 23:07, 9 April 2010 (UTC)

Souza is wrong on his point, the article presents an AGW skeptic (not climate change) position, AGW and climate change are not the same, many (even most) skeptics believe climate change is quite natural, in fact the book suggests there has been more climate change (historically) than the AGW camp believes. Template:Unsigned-unk

That's beside the point. It's written from an "in-universe" perspective which ignores the mainstream. And that's contrary to policy. Guettarda (talk) 16:16, 10 April 2010 (UTC)

What Guettarda said... As a pointer to this please check WP:UNDUE specifically the paragraph starting with "In articles specifically about a minority viewpoint..." --Kim D. Petersen (talk) 18:58, 10 April 2010 (UTC)

This is not an article about a minority viewpoint; it's an article about a book which takes a minority viewpoint. The article should be about the book, not the viewpoint. Regards, Jonathan A Jones (talk) 20:21, 10 April 2010 (UTC)

Um, yeah. I already answered this question of yours in the next section: We don't - or shouldn't - write articles which can leave readers with the impression that Hogwarts is a real place, even if we are writing an article about "the book". The same applies here. It would be nice if you read the answer to your question before repeating it. Guettarda (talk) 20:31, 10 April 2010 (UTC)

I was about to say much the same, but you've said it better. Much as we begin the article about Hogwarts by saying it is fictional, we could solve the POV problems of this article by a disclaimer at the beginning. Fictional (or better: propaganda) would do, but I don't suppose Lar's team would go for that. Has anyone got a better suggestion? William M. Connolley (talk) 20:38, 10 April 2010 (UTC)

The analogy is false; this article is analogous to Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone, not to Hogwarts. It's about a book. Regards, Jonathan A Jones (talk) 20:43, 10 April 2010 (UTC)

Um, yeah... Since I already addressed just that issue, I can only conclude that you're just being intentionally obtuse. I will treat your future comments accordingly. Guettarda (talk) 03:34, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

Unsure as to why people are talking about wp:fringe or as has been said above "Fictional" this is neither a minority viewpoint nor fictional, it would also be nice if an editor actually gace a reason for the pov tag other than the somewhat spurious ones so far put forward, thanks mark nutley (talk) 21:34, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

Yes, it's non-mainstream. Fiction in an analogy. The answers you seek are in this section; start with Dave's comment on 23:02, 9 April 2010. Guettarda (talk) 22:19, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

@JAJ: HPatPS begins "is a novel", which implies fictional. I don't think you're suggesting we add "fictional" to this one, so could you clarify what you mean? William M. Connolley (talk) 08:27, 12 April 2010 (UTC)

@Guettarda. How do you interpret this as non mainstream, it is a history of the hockey stick, can you tell me how you feel what is essentially a history book can be outside the mainstream? mark nutley (talk) 14:08, 12 April 2010 (UTC)

I suggest you take a look at the title of the book. It's the same as the title of the article. There's enough information there to strongly suggest that it's promoting a non-mainstream view. If you can't recognise that, I can't really help you. The onus is on you to gain at least a basic understanding of topics you want to edit. Guettarda (talk) 05:14, 13 April 2010 (UTC)

I suggest you read the book before commenting on it, never judge a book by it`s cover. The title is hardly outside the mainstream either is it, and if it is perhaps you could actually explain your reasoning? mark nutley (talk) 06:29, 13 April 2010 (UTC)

OK, so has the POV tag been added because the editor feels that the book itself is POV, and thus this article is also because it doesn't discredit the book? Cla68 (talk) 07:10, 13 April 2010 (UTC)

If you mean, does the book have a point of view at variance with mainstream science or reality, then yes indeed it does William M. Connolley (talk) 08:22, 13 April 2010 (UTC)

The book does not have a point of view at variance with "mainstream science", it is a book describing something which happened. That`s it. How do you think it is what you say? mark nutley (talk) 10:10, 13 April 2010 (UTC)

POV

I see that the {{POV}} tag has been added by William M. Connolley (talk · contribs) without any explanation. As far as I can see the article is well referenced and balanced. I removed the POV tag, and if someone can add a rationale for inclusion please do it here at the discussion page. Nsaa (talk) 13:56, 9 April 2010 (UTC)

without any explanation - were you to bother reading the section just above you'd have seen where I bothered to give an explanation William M. Connolley (talk) 14:19, 9 April 2010 (UTC)

I'm afraid I didn't understand your explanation. Could you possibly explain succinctly exactly what your complaint is? Regards, Jonathan A Jones (talk) 17:48, 9 April 2010 (UTC)

You're right, you are. See the section above, entitled "Problems?". See my comments there? Read them William M. Connolley (talk) 18:10, 9 April 2010 (UTC)

I've restored the tag, per the section above. Hopefully Nsaa will find the time to read that section sometime William M. Connolley (talk) 22:42, 9 April 2010 (UTC)

William, I'm afraid I can't even understand your grammar, never mind your supposed explanation. The POV tag was simply nonsense. Regards, Jonathan A Jones (talk) 16:00, 10 April 2010 (UTC)

Looks like plain English to me. As for the POV tag, read Dave's comment. He takes the time to lay it out quite clearly for those unfamiliar with policy. Guettarda (talk) 16:14, 10 April 2010 (UTC)

I'm still trying to work out how "You're right, you are" can be a reply to "I'm afraid I didn't understand your explanation", unless William is suggesting I'm afraid of something? He clearly thinks he's saying something, but I really have no idea what it is. Re Dave Souza, I guess you mean the "in universe" critique? This is interesting, but this article is about the book, not about the underlying issue. Regards, Jonathan A Jones (talk) 18:17, 10 April 2010 (UTC)

We don't - or shouldn't - write articles which can leave readers with the impression that Hogwarts is a real place, even if we are writing an article about "the book". The same applies here. Guettarda (talk) 18:47, 10 April 2010 (UTC)

I'm still trying to work out how "You're right, you are" can be. Sigh. Read your edit comment William M. Connolley (talk) 20:28, 10 April 2010 (UTC)

Connolley only says it "has the usual problems" and identifies a typo that has since been fixed, there's no explanation. It looks like vandalism to me, Connolley appears to have a beef with the book itself, he is the one with the POV issue. I would revert the POV tag if I knew how, perhaps someone else would be kind enough. Also is there a way to report Connolleys vandalism, he seems to be all over many 'climate change' related articles, his point of view on this subject might be over-represented on Wikipedia. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.58.243.130 (talk) 23:28, 9 April 2010 (UTC)

I disagree. There is no need for this POV tag. Bundsche (talk) 05:22, 10 April 2010 (UTC)

You're scibaby and you're banned William M. Connolley (talk) 20:28, 10 April 2010 (UTC)

Having a POV tag on an article is no big deal. Let's work our way through resolving it. WMC, what issues need to be resolved before you'll agree to removing the tag? Cla68 (talk) 01:23, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

As far as I know a {{POV}} tag should be followed up with substantial comments on the discussion page. On the POV page we can read "The editor placing this template in an article should promptly begin a discussion on the article's talk page. In the absence of any discussion, or if the discussion has become dormant, then this tag may be removed by any editor." and "should not be used as a badge of shame. Do not use this template to "warn" readers about the article." which is how I interpret WMC inserting of it as. The way forward is to identify problematic areas as done below in the last three treads[1]. Nsaa (talk) 12:24, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

There is a discussion. It is in the section above this one. MN has done his best to derail it with spurious allegations of vandlaism, but if you ignore him you can still read the discussion William M. Connolley (talk) 19:29, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps you could reprise the issues you feel remain? I'm sure we would all find that helpful. Jonathan A Jones (talk) 19:56, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

Connolly's edits are comparable to those made to the 'evolution' article by people with a religious faith, for the non-believer the evidence is not compelling at all, there are too many holes, both side obviously see views opposite to theirs as not being 'neutral'. Connolley and others argue in many 'climate change' related articles on Wikipedia that the AGW skeptic viewpoint is simply invalid because it's a minority view, yet he is a prolific Wikipedia contributor always suppressing alternative positions then claiming there's no debate. He routinely disrupts articles opposing his view and lost his Wikipedia admin status because of it, he is incapable of neutrality.

The book may expose valid shortcomings in the science behind the production of the 'hockey stick' graph which appears to suppress both the 'Medieval Warm Period' and 'Little Ice Age', the elimination of this historically documented climate variation should of course be based on sound science, if the proxy based science has weaknesses then it and the computer models based on it should be treated with skepticism and thoroughly tested. A genuine scientist would be open to criticism of their methods, it allows the science to improve. MWP/LIA deniers like Connolley seem to either believe there's nothing left to learn, or more likely they have a preconceived view and select data to suit it (ie. not neutral).

The book is a reaction to the failure of the climate science community to adequately test their own work, or allow those skeptical of it to test it. It contains a factual historical record of events leading up to publication of the 'Hockey Stick' by the IPCC. Much of the record was (rather fortuitously) confirmed by the scientists involved when CRU emails were leaked in 2009. Clearly the book will not have a neutral point of view, but this article can.

There is a general POV problem with climate science related articles on Wikipedia, Connolley and other followers of the AGW religion are responsible. This is still a very active area of research, there is still much to learn, there is extensive debate and the science is not settled. Wikipedia has been hijacked by the WMP/LIA deniers who seek to further discredit any work that goes against their faith. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.75.36.245 (talk) 16:17, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

Try rephrasing that without the personal comments. Focus on content, not contributors. Guettarda (talk) 22:21, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

This [2] adds to the POV problems William M. Connolley (talk) 15:37, 13 April 2010 (UTC)

It`s not a point of view, see This section please mark nutley (talk) 15:40, 13 April 2010 (UTC)

The Hockey Stick Illusion relates the story of Michael Mann's hockey stick graph

Another POV problem is over The Hockey Stick Illusion relates the story of Michael Mann's hockey stick graph. But this is an error: the graph isn't Mann's. It is however true that the skeptics usually say it is. So either this needs correcting to "MBH" or it needs correcting to "What the author calls M but is actually MBH". I'm not sure which is appropriate William M. Connolley (talk) 20:50, 10 April 2010 (UTC)

Both, I think: " the graph...published in...which the author calls..." It's our responsibilty to give adequate context so that readers know what we're talking about without having to click through the link, but without recounting the entire article that lies on the other end of the hyperlink. Guettarda (talk) 23:03, 10 April 2010 (UTC)

Yes I agree that we should describe the paper by naming all the editors in it as it has been done now by William M. Connolley (talk · contribs). Although it may be propper to only use his name in som circumstances. For example Michael Mann was the lead author on the IPCC Third Assessment Report on the paleoclimate chapter (Montford,p.39 and p.310). Where he was in the position to review his own work (sic) and writing the final chapter promoting his own hockey stick graph. McIntyre has said that this would be entirely illegal outside of a banana republic according to this book.(Montford,p.310). In the Wegman report we have a graph (see figure 5.3[3] replicated in the book in figure 9.2 (Montford,p.254)) and some discussion about how "independent" the reconstructions are seen from a social network view and how Mann is in the center of this community of paleoclimatists. I.e. Using Mann alone may be appropriate in the context of the Hockey stick graph.

Source

• Montford, Andrew (2010). The Hockey Stick Illusion; Climategate and the Corruption of Science. Stacey International. p. 482. ISBN 1906768358.

So on this point we do not need to uphold the POV tag. I will suggest that WMC and others that says the article has a WP:NPOV issue keep on with this kind of comments, and not as we have seen in the two discussions above. Nsaa (talk) 12:16, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

Does Mountford really say For example Michael Mann was the lead author on the IPCC Third Assessment Report on the paleoclimate chapter (Montford,p.39 and p.310)? If so, the book is worse than I thought. The TAR doesn't *have* a palaeo chapter [4]. Mann was *a* lead author of chapter 2, but not a coordinating lead author. AR4 has a paaleo chapter [5] but Mann wasn't a lead author. What has Mountford been smoking? William M. Connolley (talk) 13:11, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

Please strike your above comments as they violate wp:blp. Thank you. I will check the book again and let you know what he has written ok mark nutley (talk) 14:06, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

Chapter 2 has two paleoclimate sections, so I see no problem in describing this as the paleoclimate chapter (i.e., the chapter which discusses paleoclimate) in a semi-popular text. Jonathan A Jones (talk) 15:37, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

How very generous of you; but even given that generosity you still have the problem that Mann is *a* lead author, not *the* lead author. This is all of a piece with the usual personalisation; indeed I've only just corrected the usual "Mann's hockey stick" stuff William M. Connolley (talk) 16:09, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

I have no problem at all; I'm just pointing out the facts. The phrasing "the lead author" rather than "a lead author" is certainly loose, but this is a semi-popular book. Do you happen to know how the lead authors divided up responsibility for this chapter? Regards, Jonathan A Jones (talk) 16:27, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

A rather than The was my main point; if this was in the article it would be a problem; as it is, it is just a convenient example of AM's carelessness. No I don't know how the stuff was divvied up, sorry; I was never involved with that stuff William M. Connolley (talk) 19:25, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

Bratby

Who is Phillip Bratby, and why do we care about his opinion? Guettarda (talk) 01:16, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

Yep, Its basically a self-published source, since everyone was invited to comment on the inquiry. And i can't see what his relevance is either. --Kim D. Petersen (talk) 02:34, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

This paragraph has now been removed [6] by Guettarda (talk · contribs). As long as this is true (self published on the site parliament.uk "Memorandum submitted by Phillip Bratby (CRU 17)". Archived from the original on 2010-04-11. ) I aggree with this removal, and we have solved another WP:NPOV issue. Great! Nsaa (talk) 12:33, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

Gilder quote

The Gilder quote appears to be self-published - it doesn't appear to have had even cursory attention from an editor (Columbo or Colombo? "Hockey Stick" or "hockey stick"?) and I'm not sure what sort of expertise Gilder is supposed to have on the topic. But even more than that, it's basically one long quote that doesn't make sense. "Columbo figure"? Is the average reader supposed to have a clue what that means? And why is that 90-word sentence quoted in entirety? It's almost incomprehensible in the original context. Reproduced here, devoid of context (or critical commentary, in violation of WP:NFCC), it's meaningless. Yeah, it's one of the few comments on the book. But it's self-published, it comes from a source (the DI) known to be unreliable, and Gilder is not an expert on any of this. So, again, what's the point of it? Guettarda (talk) 05:08, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

The Glider and Calder quotes probably both need to come out. Calder's quote is from the book itself via Amazon. Cla68 (talk) 10:15, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

The Gilder quote is out [7] by Guettarda (talk · contribs) and it looks fine. I think if this should be used we need to pinpoint that its published on the policy think tank Discovery Institutes page (as we do now [8]). I don't see that its self published. Can you indicate why (that no one has removed the typos, it doesn't indicate that it's not published under editorial control as you indicate by stating its self published)? Columbo TV series was great, and even know it's cool to watch it sometimes – an interesting comparison ;-) Nsaa (talk) 12:47, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

I've just rewrote the full quote and added an explanation and link for the Columbo stuff. Nsaa (talk) 13:20, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

Nigel Calder

Kim has again slapped a rs tag on this, with the edit comment Blurbs on book covers are not reliable - typically written by someone asked to write a positive review However unless i see a reliable source saying calder was asked to give a good review then i suggest this tag be removed. Calder is a notable person and i doubt he would give a good review if he did not think the book was indeed well written. mark nutley (talk) 16:45, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

Book pre-reviews are generally not reliable. They are typically written by people who are asked to write a positive review. Exceptions to this is rare - in fact the only one i can remember where it wasn't the case, is Heinleins praise of the The Mote in God's Eye, which he refused to write unless they made significant changes (Heinleins praise was one of the toughest things to get)... it was so rare for Pournelle and Niven that they wrote about it.--Kim D. Petersen (talk) 16:55, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

Kim, were is your wp:rs which states Calder was asked to write a positive review? If you do not have one please remove the tag. mark nutley (talk) 16:58, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

Mark, it is up to you to convince us that it is a reliable source. Book covers and blurbs are generally not reliable sources. --Kim D. Petersen (talk) 17:02, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

No kim, you slapped a tag on it, it is for you to prove the tag is needed, please do so. It is alos you who are saying reviews on book covers are not reliable not I, so again please show me a reliable source stating they are not, thank you mark nutley (talk) 17:12, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

Mark it would really be nice, if you'd once in a while would take note of the fact, that editors who have been here a while, have a more extensive experience with what a reliable source is, and how tags are supposed to be used. (that of course doesn't mean that they are correct - but it should give thought) For your information this regularly comes up at WP:RSN and generally blurbs are considered unreliable. They are alway selected from "friendly" sources (have you ever seen a critical blurb?)- they are often quoted out of context, even when they are quoted from a real review. Here is one such discussion on RS/N, which touches upon several of the problems with Amazon reviews and blubs. [9] --Kim D. Petersen (talk) 17:54, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for this link Kim, very helpful. Regards, Jonathan A Jones (talk) 19:23, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

Mark, I don't think the Calder quote should be in the article either. Cla68 (talk) 22:48, 11 April 2010 (UTC)

Could a compromise be to say that the quote is On the book cover ... or something like that? Then we clearly say that this comment is accepted by the autor of the book as a selling point. (in this regard the comment could be negative, iff the publisher sees it as big selling point(?). is this compromise workable? Nsaa (talk) 05:25, 12 April 2010 (UTC)

I don't think so. Comments off book covers or book jackets, as far as I know, have not ever been considered as acceptably reliably sourced in Wikipedia. Cla68 (talk) 23:15, 12 April 2010 (UTC)

More wp:or

[10] Given we have refs which say this book covers the history of the hockey stick graph we have had WMC and now KDP inserting a wp:pov using wp:or tp say that it only covers "Some", with no refs as usual to back this ludicrous claim. So lets get this over with, KDM an WMC were is your ref`s for the content you are trying to insert mark nutley (talk) 14:34, 13 April 2010 (UTC)

Check the edit history [11] before you froth over. And where are the refs for your claim? William M. Connolley (talk) 16:41, 13 April 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, that diff makes no sense to what i wrote above. Both yourself and KDP have inserted wp:or with your claims. My refs are the refs in the article all of which say in one form or another the book covers the history of the hockey stick. You are the one inserting a POV into the article, as you as usual do not have a ref to support your text. mark nutley (talk) 17:07, 13 April 2010 (UTC)

Oh good grief, was there something about source: http://www.channel4.com/news/articles/science_technology/questions+for+aposclimategateapos+boss+facing+mps/3566117 that you failed to understand? William M. Connolley (talk) 20:57, 13 April 2010 (UTC)

Good grief indeed, you are putting "The book covers some of the history of the "hockey stick graph" Your ref actually says a book covering some of the events leading up to so-called Climategate This is of course already covered in the article The last few chapters of the book deal with the Climatic Research Unit email controversy. As i said, you are engaging in wp:or And who the hell put Climatic Research Unit email controversy It`s called Climategate, that`ll have to be changed mark nutley (talk) 21:18, 13 April 2010 (UTC)

Mark, you're pushing a fringe viewpoint with a pov section title – that's unacceptable in any article, and particularly unacceptable in a BLP. Don't do it. . . dave souza, talk 21:43, 13 April 2010 (UTC)

Dave what the hell are you on about? What POV section title? What BLP? This is an article about a book mark nutley (talk) 21:46, 13 April 2010 (UTC)

It's called Climatic Research Unit email controversy, get used to it. The fringe pov claims haven't stood up to independent analysis. . . dave souza, talk 22:02, 13 April 2010 (UTC)

No it`s called "Climategate" get used to it. Given that is in the title of the book and all. As i said that`ll have to be changed mark nutley (talk) 08:17, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

Bibliography

Moved from my talk page - Guettarda (talk)

[12] This is not in further reading, bookers book is. This is a Bibilography Bell, Stewart. The Martyr's Oath: The Apprenticeship of a Homegrown Terrorist. Mississauga, ON: Wiley, 2005. Further reading is totally different mate mark nutley (talk) 14:43, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

OK, well, it still doesn't belong here. Guettarda (talk) 15:02, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

Of course it does, thats what a bibiography is for, why do you think it does not need one? mark nutley (talk) 15:04, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

A bibliography in what sense? Not, I assume, in the sense of being a list of works by an author. And if it's in the Lit. cited sense, well, (a) there's already a reference section, and (b) it isn't cited, and shouldn't be, since this is an article about the book itself. Guettarda (talk) 15:09, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

WMC`s tags

Are pointless, All the stuff he tagged is in the matt ridley ref, perhaps he should read the articles the refs link to instead of just tagging everything, if someone would be kind enough to remove those tags i`d be grateful, unless of course WMC would care to? mark nutley (talk) 16:57, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

I'm inclined to agree, but I usually find it's simpler just to add references. I've done most of them now. Jonathan A Jones (talk) 17:18, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

I have now removed all the tags except for one (the specify tag) which I don't understand; not sure if this was one of WMC's. Jonathan A Jones (talk) 17:55, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

Thats Guettarda`s i assume he means specify what the crits by Ross McKitrick and Stephen McIntyre are mark nutley (talk) 17:58, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

Thanks; I'll leave that bit to you. Let me know if you need any help with references etc. Jonathan A Jones (talk) 18:16, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

El Rego isn't an RS for any personal info (or anything else, come to that). So ref 3 has to go. [13] is also used as a ref for him being a science publisher, but only says "works in..." in a postscript; this is a poor ref. The Courier ref conveniently avoids an online source. A search for Montford at its site [14] turns up nowt William M. Connolley (talk) 18:46, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

I have removed The Register. I can't see the problem with the THES as a reference, and there's nothing wrong with using newspaper stories that aren't online. Regards, Jonathan A Jones (talk) 19:06, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

I agree that non-online sources can be used. However, is it at all odd that Montford doesn't show up anywhere in there archives? Who verified this reference? William M. Connolley (talk) 19:54, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

I have a copy which I have just checked - revealing that I had misremembered the date - so thanks for making me check! Regards, Jonathan A Jones (talk) 20:53, 14 April 2010 (UTC)

"sceptic accountant" is what the granuiad calls him. Perhaps he is, indeed, sceptical of accountancy. Who knows? Perhaps this points to the source not being so great. But don't diddle it around to fit your preconceptions William M. Connolley (talk) 07:34, 15 April 2010 (UTC)

Could someone please tell me which version reads better, this one - "In 2005 Andrew Montford, a British accountant, science publisher and author of the Bishop Hill Blog, who is sceptical of man made climate change." Or this one "In 2005 Andrew Montford, a British sceptic accountant, science publisher and author of the Bishop Hill Blog", I personally think the first reads better. The second just looks silly mark nutley (talk) 07:45, 15 April 2010 (UTC)

I agree that the first one is better. Cla68 (talk) 07:48, 15 April 2010 (UTC)

Excellent, then when my revert comes around at around one today i can fix that plus change WMC`s change of climategate to Climatic Research Unit email controversy., which is also just silly as the book has climategate in the title mark nutley (talk) 08:00, 15 April 2010 (UTC)

However, the one I've used is *the one in the source*. I wonder if either of you has any respect for the source? Cla at least I would have expected better from William M. Connolley (talk) 08:02, 15 April 2010 (UTC)

I appreciate the compliment WMC. Yes, Mark, make sure the sentence doesn't contain anything that the reference doesn't. Cla68 (talk) 08:05, 15 April 2010 (UTC)

As you ca nsee from my text above it does not add anything, just moves it around a bit for readability, thanks mark nutley (talk) 08:24, 15 April 2010 (UTC)

I have restored your text but moved the references around to answer WMC's concerns. Regards, Jonathan A Jones (talk) 08:46, 15 April 2010 (UTC)

"Climategate"

I note that MN is still pushing his bizarre "this is what all the sources call it" unmarked reverts [15] William M. Connolley (talk) 09:25, 15 April 2010 (UTC)