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* '''Delist''', no improvements. [[User:SandyGeorgia|'''Sandy'''<font color="green">Georgia</font>]] ([[User talk:SandyGeorgia|Talk]]) 19:44, 3 May 2015 (UTC) |
* '''Delist''', no improvements. [[User:SandyGeorgia|'''Sandy'''<font color="green">Georgia</font>]] ([[User talk:SandyGeorgia|Talk]]) 19:44, 3 May 2015 (UTC) |
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* '''Delist'''. Unsourced sentences/paragraphs. Prose could be tightened, for example "It has been demonstrated..." occurs three times in three successive paragraphs and there is a mixture of spelling variants: organize/organise; cell signalling but sulfur bacteria, etc. [[User:DrKiernan|DrKiernan]] ([[User talk:DrKiernan|talk]]) 20:26, 11 May 2015 (UTC) |
* '''Delist'''. Unsourced sentences/paragraphs. Prose could be tightened, for example "It has been demonstrated..." occurs three times in three successive paragraphs and there is a mixture of spelling variants: organize/organise; cell signalling but sulfur bacteria, etc. [[User:DrKiernan|DrKiernan]] ([[User talk:DrKiernan|talk]]) 20:26, 11 May 2015 (UTC) |
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{{FARClosed|delisted}} [[User:Nikkimaria|Nikkimaria]] ([[User talk:Nikkimaria|talk]]) 00:56, 15 May 2015 (UTC) |
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- Notified: Rockpocket, WP Cephalopods, WP Animal anatomy, WP Molecular and Cellular Biology
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Review section
This is a 2006 promotion that has not been maintained to standards; see talk page notice from March 2015. There are problems beyond the lack of citations, which I will list if someone engages to improve the article. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 18:40, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
- Hello. I wrote the original content back in 2006. I don't think it is too far away from FA, but sadly agree that it does not meet current standards and its narrative flow has suffered from piecemeal development over the years. I unfortunately do not have the time to maintain this myself these days, but would be very willing to assist as much as I could if anyone wishes to take it on. Rockpocket 20:44, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
- Move to FARC. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 20:54, 14 April 2015 (UTC)
FARC section
- Concerns raised in the review section largely concerned referencing. Nikkimaria (talk) 04:55, 24 April 2015 (UTC)
- Delist DragonZero (Talk · Contribs) 04:52, 27 April 2015 (UTC)
- Delist, no improvements. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 19:44, 3 May 2015 (UTC)
- Delist. Unsourced sentences/paragraphs. Prose could be tightened, for example "It has been demonstrated..." occurs three times in three successive paragraphs and there is a mixture of spelling variants: organize/organise; cell signalling but sulfur bacteria, etc. DrKiernan (talk) 20:26, 11 May 2015 (UTC)
- Closing note: This removal candidate has been delisted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please leave the {{featured article review}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Nikkimaria (talk) 00:56, 15 May 2015 (UTC)