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I corrected some grammatical errors. There will be more updates when I have time.

"The man who Yip Man competed against was beaten within a few strikes"

Means the opposite of what really happened. I've changed this to:

"The man who Yip Man competed against beat him with a few strikes."

I think that would be a good idea to add the reason for death wing chun's legend: cigarettes.