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Review: July 29, 2009. (Reviewed version).

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~~Needs work, not finished~~. Have to ~~move pictures~~ over, and ~~fix links.~~ --Auntieruth55 (talk) 00:41, 17 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

okay, I've taken it as far as I will take it, unless I find an obit of him. --Auntieruth55 (talk) 15:49, 18 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

According to this "source"[1] he died in Heidelberg. --Ekki01 (talk) 16:00, 18 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Problem with dates?: Appears to be a consistent problem with 20th century dates being converted into 19th century date. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cuchulin25 (talk • contribs) 19:01, 16 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Well written: Pleasure to read, as always.

Factually accurate and verifiable: Sources are rock solid. All claims are documented.

Broad: Yup.

Neutral: That his work "touched a chord in the German imagination" and such is referenced. No concerns.

Stable: Yup.

Images: Great use of relevant historical images. No copyright concerns.

Comments: A pleasure to read, as usual. I'm glad the project has you. Easily passes GA standards. :) I should state for transparency purposes that I asked Auntieruth55 a couple of questions off-wiki and she clarified and made the relevant (albeit very minor) changes to the article as I was reading it. Recognizance (talk) 22:27, 29 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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