Talk:Haibun

To do

To conform with WP guidelines, consider the following:

• Remove POV statements
• Move main aticle EL's to references or EL section
  --Yumegusa (talk) 16:06, 24 June 2008 (UTC)

Done.--Yumegusa (talk) 17:47, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

Inclusion of kanji in article

What's the point in removing the kanji I've inserted -- twice now -- after certain Japanese terms? It's information some people would like to have. Those who don't need it can simply let their eyeballs slide over it. Shosai (talk) 19:39, 15 November 2009 (UTC)

Hi Shosai. Please read WP:MOS-JP#Using_Japanese_in_the_article_body. In each of the cases where you added kanji, it was already included in the target article. --Yumegusa (talk) 20:10, 15 November 2009 (UTC)

Naruhodo. OK, so no kanji after Basho, but kanji are ok after Phantom Hut, etc. One other point: the second sentence seems overly inclusive with genre such as short stories, autobiographies, and the like. I take it this categorization refers to haibun in English, not Japanese. I've not read all existing Japanese haiibun, of course, but I don't recall them being so broad in scope. Shosai (talk) 22:13, 15 November 2009 (UTC)

The first contest for English-language haibun?

In this edit I changed
The first contest for English-language haibun took place in 1996{{Citation needed|date=May 2010}}
to
An early contest for English-language haibun took place in 1996
as the specific claim ('first') had remained unreferenced since May 2010. Now this edit has just reinstated the unreferenced claim. I'm about to revert the edit, and would request that, in accordance with WP guidelines, any such claim should be properly referenced before reinstatement. Thanks. --candyworm (talk) 21:29, 28 August 2010 (UTC)

The assertion was again reinstated here, with slightly altered wording. I've again reverted, and left a note on the IP's Talk page requesting her to engage here. --candyworm (talk) 10:31, 8 September 2010 (UTC)

The book Wedge of Light asserts that it was the result of the first English-language haibun contest. The editors/judges had been heavily involved with haibun for many years, and knew of no other haibun contest ever held in English. What more citation is possible? It needs no further citation than the unchallenged claim later in the same paragraph that Bruce Ross's Narrow Road to the Interior was the "first anthology" of English-language haibun (which, in fact, it was). —Preceding unsigned comment added by 207.171.180.101 (talk) 00:09, 20 October 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for supplying the requested citation. According to WP guidelines, the info should be confirmed by an independent third-party source, but this will suffice unless the assertion is challenged again.--candyworm (talk) 08:38, 20 October 2010 (UTC)

In re External Links

I reverted to the original "External Links" text as Elvenscout's edit of 21 Sept 2012 introduced an error in description and deleted a relevant existing link. Please engage here on the Talk Page before reintroducing these errors. Elvenscout's edit described Haibun Today as "Jeffrey Woodward's haibun and criticism blog" whereas the publication in question is an online literary quarterly, no different than Contemporary Haibun Online or Simply Haiku which are so described. Haibun Today also has multiple editors, like these other two journals, and there is no point in identifying it as belonging to an editor or editors anymore so than it would be relevant to qualify Contemporary Haibun Today as "Jim Kacian's haibun journal" or Simply Haiku as "Robert Wilson's haiku journal." Elvenscout also deleted the link to Modern Haibun & Tanka Prose and offered his reasoning, in his Edit Summary, that the journal was minor and that it was concerned predominately with tanka. Modern Haibun & Tanka Prose published two issues in 2009 before going defunct. Only two known journals dedicated to haibun in English preceded it (Contemporary Haibun Online and Haibun Today) and it has further historical importance in the literature as being perhaps the first in-print periodical on the subject. Nor was Modern Haibun & Tanka Prose predominately a vehicle for tanka as Elvenscout claimed. It published two issues, each 180 pages or so in length, and divided its contents between haibun, tanka prose and critical articles; it published no solo tanka or haiku. Tristan noir (talk) 14:08, 21 September 2012 (UTC)

It ultimately doesn't matter, though, how much of which journals (and blogs -- they are different from "journals") are devoted to haibun. The fact is that of the eight external links on this page at the moment, seven of them are just sites that publish examples of haibun, and add very little to the article itself apart from advertising the particular blogs. Please see Wikipedia:Spam#External link spamming. This article, if it is really about haibun and not about advertising, should not have more than two or three of these links. I'm just trying to figure out which five to cut. Also, it is inappropriate to remove information without providing any justification here or in your edit summary, and uncivil to blindly revert attempts to fix that. elvenscout742 (talk) 17:39, 21 September 2012 (UTC)

But justification was offered here (on Talk) and in the edit summary. I did not intend to be "uncivil." You write, It ultimately doesn't matter, though, how much of which journals (and blogs -- they are different from "journals") are devoted to haibun. Fair enough. But you were the one who raised the subject and employed it to justify your edit in your Edit Summary. For the record, Contemporary Haibun Online, Simply Haiku, and Haibun Today, again, are not blogs but are quarterly journals. How external links to non-profit literary publications that are free can be construed as advertising is beyond me. Nevertheless, since the article, by your estimation, should carry no more than three external links and since the article is concerned with the subject of haibun, it would be consistent, in making your decision as to which to cut, to retain links to those few publications in English that specialize in the article's subject.

Tristan noir (talk) 21:00, 21 September 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, by "advertising" I meant "promotion". I meant you should not just change the word "blog" to "literary journal" without providing a justification. Even if you are right, other users might be inclined to revert you unless you provide a reason, and all you said was "repairing external link". I did not use the problem of too many external links as an excuse to push through other edits. Please do not make such accusations. I made a number of small edits simultaneously, and you should have considered all of my edit before blinding reverting everything. Please assume good faith. Also, you can't just say add brief history of pioneering H. anthologies & periodicals to justify an addition - you have to explain how they are pioneering by reference to reliable secondary sources. I otherwise agree with your point. Older, inactive sites and ones that don't specialize in haibun should probably go first. elvenscout742 (talk) 11:18, 22 September 2012 (UTC)

Removal of external links

In this edit editor Elvenscout742 removed three els with the edit summary Removed vanlistspamcruftisementkill. These are self-published sources/blogs and are basically irrelevant to this article on Japanese literature. Per WP:EDSUM: Avoid inappropriate summaries: Editors should explain their edits, but not be overly critical or harsh when editing or reverting others' work. This may be perceived as uncivil, and cause tension or bad feelings, which makes collaboration more difficult. Explain what you changed, and cite the relevant policies, guidelines or principles of good writing, but try not to target or to single out others in a way that may come across as an attack or an insult. In addition, kindly keep your edit summaries intelligible.

To attempt to denigrate a magazine/journal/periodical as "self-published" is oxymoronic, and suggests a fundamental misunderstanding of how the publishing world works: all such publications are literally self-published, but the question is whether they contain edited content. If they do, then the authors concerned are published by the journal, not self-published. Accordingly, I am restoring the links to Contemporary Haibun Online and Haibun Today, as there is clearly no consensus to remove them from this article. Both are quarterly publications which have appeared regularly for eight and five years respectively, and contain articles, interviews and reviews in addition to selected examples of the genre in English. To describe them with such gibberish as "vanlistspamcruftisementkill" is not constructive. Kindly engage in a constructive and civil manner in order to work collaboratively towards reaching consensus. --gråb whåt you cån (talk) 19:57, 13 October 2012 (UTC)

Consensus was already established elsewhere on this issue. My edit summary simply stated that the links are unnecessary and were probably placed here as WP:ADVERTISEMENT. "Denigrating" them as such is natural. One or two links to commercial publications that run "haibun" regularly may or may not be allowed, but the fact is that at the moment this article on Japanese literature focuses far too much on a derived English form, and links to external publications that publish this English form are essentially inappropriate. Your referring to my coinage of the above phrase as "gibberish" is an irrelevant personal attack. I simply took the established wikiterm "vanispamcruftisement" and added "list" and "link overkill", which are appropriate for the nature of these links. They don't belong in the article, and that is why I removed them. elvenscout742 (talk) 02:07, 14 October 2012 (UTC)

The haibun publications Contemporary Haibun Online and Haibun Today (those external links that you have now twice removed) were not at issue in the discussion that you refer to above as “elsewhere.” The consensus established there touched upon another article and another topic; it has no bearing upon the current article on haibun or upon its external links. Furthermore, neither publication in question is “commercial,” as you’ve misrepresented them above (while tendentiously citing WP:ADVERTISEMENT!); they are quite simply free online literary publications focused upon haibun – the only periodicals in English, in fact, dedicated to this genre. There is no plausible reason for removing these links. I’ve restored them, therefore.Tristan noir (talk) 03:20, 14 October 2012 (UTC)

As should be self-evident, any discussions on another article's talk page do not constitute consensus regarding this article. This article is about a literary form originating in Japan, and it is entirely appropriate that in English-language Wikipedia a considerable amount of detail should focus on its manifestation in English. Elvenscout742's personal speculations on the thinking of whatever editor originally added the 2 el's in question are of no interest or relevance. The two periodicals in question clearly qualify under WP:EL as has already been shown above. To simply repeat "They don't belong in the article" is neither helpful nor constructive. To repeatedly remove content against consensus is WP:DISRUPTIVE. --gråb whåt you cån (talk) 12:51, 14 October 2012 (UTC)

The article is supposed to be about classical Japanese literature, and the links are to unrelated websites that are published by someone who has made ridiculous claims about classical Japanese literature. The policy I linked to specified that [t]hose promoting causes or events, or issuing public service announcements, even if noncommercial, should use a forum other than Wikipedia to do so. Inclusion of links to irrelevant blogs in an article about classical Japanese literature, apparently in order to draw attention to the blogs in question, is a blatant violation of Wikipedia policy. And of course I wouldn't know which Woodward sources are for-profit or not as well as you would, given that you clearly have a close personal relationship with him. As a student of Japanese literature, I do not feel comfortable working on an article about my chosen field knowing that a significant part of the article is devoted to promotion of non-notable, modern English writings. elvenscout742 (talk) 13:00, 14 October 2012 (UTC)

Some points drawn from WP:DISRUPT:

A disruptive editor is an editor who:

• Is tendentious: continues editing an article or group of articles in pursuit of a certain point for an extended time despite opposition from other editors.
• Engages in "disruptive cite-tagging"; adds unjustified {{citation needed}} tags to an article when the content tagged is already sourced, uses such tags to suggest that properly sourced article content is questionable.
• Does not engage in consensus building:
  • repeatedly disregards other editors' questions or requests for explanations concerning edits or objections to edits;
  • repeatedly disregards other editors' explanations for their edits.
• Rejects or ignores community input

In addition, such editors may:

• Campaign to drive away productive contributors: act counter to policies and guidelines such as Wikipedia:Civility, Wikipedia:No personal attacks, Wikipedia:Ownership of articles
• Failure or refusal to "get the point"
  

In some cases, editors have perpetuated disputes by sticking to an allegation or viewpoint long after the consensus of the community has decided that moving on to other topics would be more productive. Such behavior is disruptive to Wikipedia. Believing that you have a valid point does not confer upon you the right to act as though your point must be accepted by the community when you have been told that it is not accepted.
--gråb whåt you cån (talk) 14:28, 14 October 2012 (UTC)

Change the name of this page to Haibun in English and allow for the Haibun article to focus on the early-modern Japanese literary genre its name implies , or you are the editor being disruptive. A link to a blog that publishes English compositions loosely related to the early-modern Japanese literary genre in question is WP:SPAM. It's equivalent to an article on ancient Greek or Norse mythology linking to the Age of Mythology homepage because Age of Mythology is an English-language "work" (a video game is still a work) loosely based on that subject. elvenscout742 (talk) 00:43, 15 October 2012 (UTC)

Nope. Haibun, when written in French or Russian or Japanese or English is called haibun and it is entirely appropriate that the article which deals with it, in all its variety, should be called haibun. Haibun originated in Japan but is no longer confined to that country. If you bothered to inform yourself by reading the journals you are repeatedly removing from ELs against consensus you would be aware of that. You claim that English-language haibun are but "loosely related to the early-modern Japanese literary genre" without a shred of evidence. Your editing here fits remarkably closely with the list above describing a disruptive editor. You have added nothing useful to the article, but harangue, harass and hector at every turn. You continue to push your own POV in the face of opposition from other editors and display no interest in consensus-building. It is becoming increasingly difficult to assume good faith, and any further removal of the links to the competent and accepted periodicals in question will be justly labeled Wikipedia:Vandalism, with all of the results that that implies. I trust I have your attention. --gråb whåt you cån (talk) 21:41, 15 October 2012 (UTC)

Additionally, your marking of this edit (your latest removal of the ELs in question) as 'minor' is in direct conflict with WP:MINOR which states i.a.: When not to mark an edit as a minor edit: *Adding or removing content in an article *Adding or removing references or external links in an article. As mentioned above, your edits are increasingly stretching credulity as far as WP:AGF is concerned. --gråb whåt you cån (talk) 22:06, 15 October 2012 (UTC)

Extended content

I apologize for my misunderstanding of what constituted a "minor" edit. I was under the impression that removing two links at the bottom of the page that are not given extensive coverage within the article itself, and not actually touching the content of the article, constituted a "minor" edit, but it seems I was mistaken. I am sorry for that. HOWEVER, the fact that the only coverage in the actual article of these links, and the wording of those links, were added by someone with a very close to Jeffrey Woodward, a non-notable (1, 2) poet, given WP:WEIGHT and WP:COI, means I am still highly skeptical of the links. Your POV that I have not added anything of worth to the article is a personal attack, and your understanding of WP:CONSENSUS is clearly highly flawed. How am I opposing "consensus" when one WP:SPA with a WP:COI, and ONE other user agree on something, and I disagree? Would you like to take this to dispute resolution as well? elvenscout742 (talk) 01:13, 16 October 2012 (UTC) You appear unable or unwilling to resolve disagreements with fellow editors on Talk Pages without resorting to dispute resolution, if one is to judge by your recent history as regards the articles Tanka prose and Prosimetrum. I’m not surprised, therefore, to see you threaten to raise the flag of “dispute resolution” again for what would be the third time in one month. Be that as it may, kindly refer to WP:WIKIHOUND. You have directed numerous insinuations and allegations at this editor as well as having made frequent hostile allusions to the same not only (a) in edit summaries of the articles Haibun, Tanka in English, Uta Monogatari, Tanka Prose, Prosimetrum and the related Talk Pages of said articles, (b) on your personal talk page, my personal talk page and various other User Talk pages, and (c) in AfD and RfD discussions on Tanka Prose and in the current Dispute Resolution on Prosimetrum that were opened upon your initiative. I would like to participate in Wikipedia in a productive and collaborative way. Please refrain from further employment of the various “soapboxes” cited above to push your individual POV and to lobby personally against me. Let’s try to keep discussions, where necessary, civil and focused upon pertinent issues, not upon personalities.Tristan noir (talk) 03:35, 16 October 2012 (UTC) When you show a willingness to abide by Wikipedia policies regarding spam, original research, due weight, etc., I will work with you peacefully. It is very difficult to resolve disputes with you without going to dispute resolution and/or AfD, etc., because you have consistently been unwilling to listen to my reasoned arguments on Talk pages. It is also impossible for me to single-handedly overrule both you and Bagworm, even when Wikipedia policy is clearly on my side, while you are this stubborn, which is why I have had to resort to those external forums. I do not believe you should be banned or blocked solely for having personal links to the author you have repeatedly tried to publicize via Wikipedia, since if you are willing to edit articles in a constructive capacity that alone is not a valid reason for banning/blocking. This is why I have consistently gone for low-level dispute resolution forums rather than a request for arbitration or some such. However, I am perfectly entitled to oppose you on individual issues where your COI is clearly in play, as long as I quote Wikipedia policy and avoid making personal attacks. I have consistently remained focused on article content throughout ALL of my dealings with both of you, and have met with little other than ad hominem attacks. In fact it would be fair to say that over half of your edit history at this point in time consists of little other than personal attacks against me and/or other defenses of blatant violation of Wikipedia policy. elvenscout742 (talk) 04:11, 16 October 2012 (UTC) Again, I will ask you kindly to pause, to reflect and to refrain from further unsupported allegations and assertions directed at my person with WP:WIKIHOUND in mind. If you choose to do otherwise and to pursue your many previous attacks, as your comments immediately above imply, then I will duly consider those other options for resolution available to me within the Wikipedia community.Tristan noir (talk) 16:58, 16 October 2012 (UTC) The assertions are not unsupported. You wrote a bogus article that cited as a source a book that had not yet been published, which was written/edited by the person you continue to promote here. This much is easily verifiable fact. elvenscout742 (talk) 23:55, 16 October 2012 (UTC)

Additionally, your (User:Bagworm's) interpretation of Wikipedia:Vandalism is deeply flawed. My removal of links which I view as spam and compromising of the integrity of Wikipedia as a reliable source of information, cannot possibly be considered vandalism. Vandalism implies a deliberate attempt to disrupt said integrity; I have not accused you or Tristan noir of it, since, even though in my point of view your edits have that effect, I believe it is not your intention, but merely that you have a point-of-view that is in conflict with mine. Consensus was already reached that Jeffrey Woodward's self-published sources are not a reliable source of information. I contend that any Woodward source being linked to on Wikipedia should be treated with extreme skepticism as a result. Your unilaterally defending the inclusion of Woodward material in Wikipedia does not reflect any "consensus". Your stating that just because this is English Wikipedia we should give undue weight to modern, non-notable works in an article that should be about Japanese literature is highly suspect. The fact that at present 3 out of the 5 external links on this page deal exclusively with modern English haibun, and all three are self-published blog-style websites is abysmal. And the one that I have missed up until now is apparently a vanity site belonging to one poet, and its inclusion is not justified by anything in the article. elvenscout742 (talk) 02:03, 16 October 2012 (UTC)

With this edit, Elvenscout742 has unilaterally and against consensus added a {{spam link}} template against the two external links which have been extensively discussed above, and which have been clearly shown to be valid per WP:ELYES: "Sites that contain neutral and accurate material that is relevant to an encyclopedic understanding of the subject and cannot be integrated into the Wikipedia article due to copyright issues", and not to fail WP:ELNO in any way. Elvenscout742 is continuing, despite warnings, to edit in a WP:DISRUPTive fashion, fitting precisely the following points: tendentious, disruptive tagging, does not engage in consensus building, rejects or ignores community input, campaigns to alienate productive editors, and fails or refuses to "get the point". --gråb whåt you cån (talk) 09:56, 19 October 2012 (UTC)

Yet again, Elvenscout742 has unilaterally removed the two el's in question with this edit and the summary: I am not the one being disruptive. Please provide an explanation for why half of the external links on an article about classical Japanese literature should be to modern English publications, or create a separate article on English Haibun.

Nope. Read Nobuyuki Yuasa's comments in the article. Haibun is no longer confined to its country of origin, and has established itself as a genre in world literature. Haibun, when written in French or Russian or Japanese or English is called haibun and it is entirely appropriate that the article which deals with it, in all its variety, should be called haibun. If you bothered to inform yourself by reading the journals you are repeatedly removing from ELs against consensus you would be aware of that. You claim that English-language haibun are but "loosely related to the early-modern Japanese literary genre" without a shred of evidence. --gråb whåt you cån (talk) 12:45, 20 October 2012 (UTC)

Please stop making ridiculous accusations. I did not remove any links this time, I merely replaced the templates that you removed without providing a justification, and moved the links down so that they at least are not given precedence over more relevant links. This is an article about Japanese literature, and including links to blog-style websites by modern English poets that promote commercial properties and also include misinformation about Japanese literature is highly questionable. elvenscout742 (talk) 13:19, 20 October 2012 (UTC)

Please consider WP:WEIGHT. Just because a genre called "haibun" exists outside Japan, it does not mean that 60% of the links and 50% of the text should be devoted to modern English haibun. I started the page Tanka in English to avoid this kind of problem on the Tanka article, where devotees of a small English literary movement were hijacking an article on classical Japanese literature. I have now proposed a compromise with you several times that we make a similar compromise here and you have repeatedly dismissed me. elvenscout742 (talk) 13:25, 20 October 2012 (UTC)

Any WP:WEIGHT issues can easily be dealt with by expanding this very thin article appropriately. If half the energy poured into this pointless and time-wasting disruption were spent on actually improving the article it could be considerably better than its current status. What you did or didn't do in Tanka in English is of no interest. Please focus on this article here. What is your basis for discounting Yuasa's assertion that haibun is no longer confined to its country of origin, and has established itself as a genre in world literature? You persist in describing haibun as an article about classical Japanese literature, whereas haibun is in fact a literary form originating in Japan. What is the basis of your claim that English-language haibun are but "loosely related to the early-modern Japanese literary genre"? By your logic, the sonnet article should only be about Italian sonnet, and we should make a separate article for sonnet in English! --gråb whåt you cån (talk) 15:52, 20 October 2012 (UTC)

RfC: Should 2 external links be kept or removed?

These two els have been removed repeatedly from the External links section, by a single editor against consensus:

• contemporary haibun online – an online quarterly
• Haibun Today – an online quarterly

Extensive discussion has taken place on the article Talk page, but the situation remains unresolved. --gråb whåt you cån (talk) 13:42, 19 October 2012 (UTC)

I think I tried to remove them three times. You have blankly reverted me more than that. The fact is this article is and should be about the early-modern Japanese genre, but you and one other user (who has a close personal link to the self-publisher responsible for the two links) insist on giving precedence in the external links section to unrelated modern English publications, which are both non-notable and contain misinformation about Japanese literature. Please consider that this is supposed to be an encyclopedia article. If Wikipedia was a paper encyclopedia the only way those references would be included would be if one of the contributors or editors was linked with Mr. Woodward and wanted to include them as promotion. elvenscout742 (talk) 12:40, 20 October 2012 (UTC)

All of the relevant discussion appears in the section above. This RfC is a request for comment from other editors, not a request for you to repeat your position yet again. --gråb whåt you cån (talk) 12:49, 20 October 2012 (UTC)

Understood. For the record, I posted a link to this discussion on WikiProject Japan. This page is also covered under that project, and the opinions of those editors are just as important. elvenscout742 (talk) 13:29, 20 October 2012 (UTC)