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:[[Image:Symbol declined.svg|20px]] '''Declined'''. This request is not for a [[WP:REDIRECT|redirect]] to be created. It appears instead that you are requesting an edit to the existing article. See the instructions at [[WP:EDIT]] on how to edit an existing article. [[User:Anupmehra|<font size="3"><span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;color:black">Anupmehra</span></font>]] -[[User talk:Anupmehra|<font size="3"><span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva;color:black">Let's talk!</span></font>]] 14:54, 24 January 2015 (UTC)
:[[Image:Symbol declined.svg|20px]] '''Declined'''. This request is not for a [[WP:REDIRECT|redirect]] to be created. It appears instead that you are requesting an edit to the existing article. See the instructions at [[WP:EDIT]] on how to edit an existing article. [[User:Anupmehra|<font size="3"><span style="font-family:Old English Text MT;color:black">Anupmehra</span></font>]] -[[User talk:Anupmehra|<font size="3"><span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva;color:black">Let's talk!</span></font>]] 14:54, 24 January 2015 (UTC)
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== Redirect request: [[Icfai Law School]] ==

*Target of redirect: [[ICFAI University, Dehradun]]
*Reason: Icfai Law School is a constituent if ICFAI University, Dehradun
*Source (if applicable): http://iudehradun.edu.in/fol/
[[User:Hrithikashu|Hrithikashu]] ([[User talk:Hrithikashu|talk]]) 16:48, 24 January 2015 (UTC)

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Redirect request: Juan Doe , Juanita Doe , Tyrone Doe , Oprah Doe

This request has been accepted. Please do not modify it.
  • Target of redirect: John Doe
  • Reason: alternate versions of John Doe placeholder name for unknown/anonymous people
  • Source (if applicable): [1][2][3][4][5][6][7][8]

65.94.40.137 (talk) 16:35, 4 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • Declined. Juan Doe → John Doe: neologisms attributed to largely unreliable sources. Juanita Doe → John Doe: neologisms attributed to largely unreliable sources. Tyrone Doe → John Doe: neologisms attributed to largely unreliable sources. Oprah Doe → John Doe: neologisms attributed to largely unreliable sources. Bellerophon talk to me 00:10, 11 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment: you are mistaken what the sourcing requirements are for redirects. "Juan Doe" and "Juanita Doe" are viable search terms BECAUSE they are used in Fiction to represent "John Doe" in different unrelated works by multiple authors. Therefore it is a good search term, and thus a redirect should exist. -- 65.94.40.137 (talk) 08:59, 11 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment: I've already addressed the mistakes in the rejection. It is clearly not a neologism, and is clearly used in scholarly sources and even in court cases. Why is this not getting a new reply, and instead is just being enclosed without further comments? -- 65.94.40.137 (talk) 08:31, 20 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not sure why whoever requested this requested it. Sorry for enclosing it. Do you have a problem with me doing that? You know, why should these redirects be created? Are they really neologisms? 174.29.75.144 (talk) 22:48, 20 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Stop enclosing the replies. IF you can't read the replies and process the information, then you're not processing the request. Ofcourse there's a problem. The replies address the concerns presented in the original rejection. If you can't even read the replies then don't touch them. Your deletion of the additional information [18] is highly inappropriate, instead of actually conversing. -- 65.94.40.137 (talk) 06:56, 21 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'm sorry. I promise I will stop enclosing the replies. Can you please stop this from being an edit war? If you stop doing that edit war thing, I'll stop enclosing the replies, OK? 174.29.75.144 (talk) 22:48, 20 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

What edit war are you referring to? I did not delete the replies, nor was I the one to restore the deleted material. Replying to people isn't an edit war. -- 65.94.40.137 (talk) 07:37, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@65.94.40.137: Your replies were not ignored, they simply weren't seen because they had been enclosed in the collapsed template by another editor. In light of the additional sources you have provided, I have created the first two of your requests. Please clam down. Bellerophon talk to me 17:55, 21 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I do know they weren't ignored, because otherwise they would not have been enclosed. I am upset with the behaviour of 174.29.75.144 who enclosed the replies without doing anything except to enclose the replies for seemingly no proper reason, especially with the deletion of the material. -- 65.94.40.137 (talk) 07:37, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I agree with Bellerophon. I'm sorry for enclosing the requests (I was doing that to get the request ready for manual archiving), and I'll stop enclosing the comments. Thank you for providing the additional sources. 174.29.75.144 (talk) 22:48, 20 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

In future, you should perhaps read the replies and process them, instead of ignoring the content and enclosing replies without further consideration. If you're not going to process a request, enclosing replies that address the concerns outlined in a rejection seems highly inappropriate. -- 65.94.40.137 (talk) 07:39, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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Redirect request: Template:Exclude in print

65.210.65.16 (talk) 18:58, 16 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Redirect request: Giants (mythology)

This request has been accepted. Please do not modify it.
  • Target of redirect: Giant (mythology)
  • Reason: "Giants" is the plural form of "giant."
  • Source (if applicable):

174.29.75.144 (talk) 22:48, 20 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: Patrick (Spongebob Squarepants)

This request has been accepted. Please do not modify it.
  • Target of redirect: Patrick Star
  • Reason: This is to distinguish him from other characters named Patrick. Another reason I'm requesting this is because "Spongebob Squarepants" is an alternative capitalization of SpongeBob SquarePants.
  • Source (if applicable): Patrick Star

174.29.75.144 (talk) 03:51, 21 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: Kwanghee

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192.0.148.200 (talk) 06:50, 21 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: Taster's Choice (band)

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65.94.40.137 (talk) 08:03, 21 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: Khurrians

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46.241.151.3 (talk) 09:41, 21 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: WorldVu

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65.94.40.137 (talk) 09:44, 21 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: OneWeb

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65.94.40.137 (talk) 09:44, 21 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: Penguin suit

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113.210.137.214 (talk) 11:19, 21 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Redirect created. You can find it at Black tie. Thank you for your contribution to Wikipedia!
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Redirect request: Pope Leo the Tenth, Pope Leo the tenth, Pope Leo the 10th

This request has been accepted. Please do not modify it.


  • Target of redirect: Pope Leo X
  • Reason: "X" is "10" in Roman numerals. The second one complements Pope Leo the third.
  • Source (if applicable):

164.104.185.108 (talk) 17:39, 21 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: Cellular Concrete, Foamed Concrete

This request has been declined. Please do not modify it.


Siva175 (talk) 20:53, 21 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • Declined. Cellular Concrete → Foam Concrete: The target page is unstable. It's full of copyright violation and likely to be deleted.. Foamed Concrete → Foam Concrete: The target page is unstable. It's full of copyright violation and likely to be deleted.. Bellerophon talk to me 12:16, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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Category request: Category:Circuits designed by Hermann Tilke

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79.65.101.0 (talk) 22:36, 21 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • Declined. Insufficiently descriptive 'circuits' has multiple contexts in the English language. Please be more specific. I would accept a request for Category:Racing circuits designed by Hermann Tilke, if that is agreeable to you? Bellerophon talk to me 12:29, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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Category request: Category: Collegiate churches in Malta

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NickGeorge1993 (talk) 22:45, 21 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: CDD (railway station), CDD railway station

This request has been declined. Please do not modify it.


  • Target of redirect: Cardenden railway station
  • Reason: The Cardenden railway station can also be called CDD (railway station).
  • Source (if applicable): CDD

174.29.75.144 (talk) 23:06, 21 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • Declined. CDD (railway station) → Cardenden railway station: Unnecessary disambiguation. The target page is already listed at the DAB page. Not a viable Wikilink. CDD railway station → Cardenden railway station: Unnecessary disambiguation. The target page is already listed at the DAB page. Seems a highly unlikely Wikilink. Bellerophon talk to me 12:52, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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Redirect request: Dictators of US Client States

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Sfarney (talk) 06:43, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: List of Dictatorships Supported by USA

This request has been accepted. Please do not modify it.


Sfarney (talk) 06:46, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: Prison Garde, Vaughn Robert Squire

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118.8.151.5 (talk) 08:41, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: Penguin (bird)

This request has been declined. Please do not modify it.


  • Target of redirect: Penguin
  • Reason: Penguins are birds.
  • Source (if applicable):

164.104.184.111 (talk) 15:06, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: Guinea spice

This request has been accepted. Please do not modify it.


  • Target of redirect: Cayenne pepper
  • Reason: Cayenne pepper is also known as "Guinea spice."
  • Source (if applicable): [21]

164.104.184.111 (talk) 17:14, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: 爸爸回来了, Ba Ba Hui Lai Le

This request has been accepted. Please do not modify it.


  • Target of redirect: Dad is Back
  • Reason: The first one of those alternative names for Dad is Back is in Chinese, and the second one is in Pinyin.
  • Source (if applicable):

174.29.75.144 (talk) 23:30, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: MND (disease)

This request has been declined. Please do not modify it.
  • Target of redirect: Amyotrophic lateral sclerosis
  • Reason: "MND" is the abbreviation for "Motor neurone disease," the British name for Lou Gehrig's disease.
  • Source (if applicable):

174.29.75.144 (talk) 23:35, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: Baba Sohan Singh Sital

This request has been declined. Please do not modify it.


  • Target of redirect: Sohan Singh
  • Reason:
  • Source (if applicable):

1.39.34.45 (talk) 02:40, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: Bell Telephone Laboratories, Incorporated

This request has been declined. Please do not modify it.
  • Target of redirect: Bell Labs
  • Reason: alternate name
  • Source (if applicable):

74.104.204.80 (talk) 12:46, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Declined. The title you suggested seems like an unlikely search term. Could you provide a source showing that it is a commonly used alternate name? The company was formerly known as Bell Telephone Laboratories and it already redirects to target article. Anupmehra -Let's talk! 20:38, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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Redirect request: WP:LHW, WP:LHWP, WP:LOHOW, WP:LOHOWP, WP:HOAXLIST

This request has been declined. Please do not modify it.


69.29.66.227 (talk) 16:16, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • Redirect created. WP:LHWP → Wikipedia: List of hoaxes on Wikipedia. Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Bellerophon talk to me 19:42, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Declined. WP:LHW → Wikipedia: List of hoaxes on Wikipedia: The title you suggested seems unlikely. Could you provide a source showing that it is a commonly used alternate name?. WP:LOHOW → Wikipedia: List of hoaxes on Wikipedia: The title you suggested seems unlikely. Could you provide a source showing that it is a commonly used alternate name?. WP:LOHOWP → Wikipedia: List of hoaxes on Wikipedia: The title you suggested seems unlikely. Could you provide a source showing that it is a commonly used alternate name?. WP:HOAXLIST → Wikipedia: List of hoaxes on Wikipedia: The title you suggested already exists on Wikipedia. Bellerophon talk to me 19:42, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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Redirect request: Food: A Love Story

This request has been accepted. Please do not modify it.
  • Target of redirect: Jim Gaffigan
  • Reason: Jim Gaffigan wrote Food: A Love Story. A redirect already exists for Dad is Fat.
  • Source (if applicable):

164.104.184.110 (talk) 17:11, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: yadav_akshay

This request has been declined. Please do not modify it.
  • Target of redirect: [[ ]]
  • Reason:
  • Source (if applicable):akshayyadav.in

Akshay Yadav

Member of the parliament - Lok sabha Constituency - ==== Firozabad ==== === Born === - 25 th October 1986 etawah Uttar Pradesh === Nationality ===- Indian

akshay yadav , samajwadi party 1 Political party - Samajwadi party 2 Early life and education 3 Political career 3.1 Hobbies 4 References Political party - Samajwadi party

=== Residence === - saifai etawah Uttar Pradesh === Alma mater === - St. Mary etawah , DMPS Ghaziabad 

                            Graduation- BBA amity noida

=== Profession ===- politician === Parents ===- prof. Ramgopal yadav & late smt Phoolan Devi === Spouse ===- Dr Richa yadav

Relations

prof Ramgopal yadav - father Mulayam singh yadav - uncle Shivpal yadav - uncle Akhilesh yadav - brother Dharmendra yadav - brother

Early life and education

Akshay yadav was born to prof ram Gopal yadav & late Smt. Phoolan Devi on 25 th October 1986 in etawah Uttar Pradesh . He studied at St Mary etawah & completed his 10th & 12 th from DMPS Ghaziabad & graduation in BBA from amity noida . He got married on 10 th February 2010 to Dr Richa yadav D/o Capt Anjit Singh. He is now blessed with 2 children Dhriti yadav & Aarav yadav.

Political career

Akshay yadav actively participated in 2007 Vidhan Sabha elections in Uttar Pradesh in the campaign for Shri Mulayam singh yadav. 2014- was elected the member of parliament from Firozabad with a winning margin of 115000 votes . It was considered a grand win as the entire elections were influenced by the strong Modi wave . Hobbies

Shooting ( has participated in state & national level shooting competitions & received many medals) Photography Movies Akshay Yadav is a member of the Samajwadi Party and has won the Indian general elections, 2014 from the 116.203.74.7 (talk) 17:19, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

OK, that's a useful article. But can you use the Article Wizard to create it? 164.104.184.110 (talk) 17:29, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: GeeksOUT

This request has been accepted. Please do not modify it.
  • Target of redirect: Geeks OUT
  • Reason: Since it is a website, it is often written with no space in the middle.
  • Source (if applicable):

Kbabej (talk) 21:44, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: geeksout.org

This request has been accepted. Please do not modify it.
  • Target of redirect: Geeks OUT
  • Reason: Since this is a website, it is often written together as one URL.
  • Source (if applicable):

Kbabej (talk) 21:49, 23 January 2015 (UTC) Redirect created. Thank you for your contribution to Wikipedia!—CraigyDavi (T∙C∙@) 23:06, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: GeeksOUT!

This request has been accepted. Please do not modify it.
  • Target of redirect: Geeks OUT
  • Reason: Since this is a website, people often do not put the space in between the words and add the exclamation point on the banner.
  • Source (if applicable): Website[1]

Kbabej (talk) 21:53, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ "Geeks OUT!". Geeks OUT!. Retrieved 23 January 2015.

Redirect created. Thank you for your contribution to Wikipedia!—CraigyDavi (T∙C∙@) 23:06, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: MegaChat, Mega Chat, Megachat

This request has been accepted. Please do not modify it.
  • Target of redirect: Mega (service)#MegaChat
  • Reason: make it easier for readers to find material.
  • Source (if applicable): see the sources used in the target section.

82.136.210.153 (talk) 22:16, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Redirect created. All of the redirects you requested were created. Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia!—CraigyDavi (T∙C∙@) 23:06, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Category request: Category:Crops originating from Europe

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177.141.130.55 (talk) 22:38, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: The Invincibubble, Mr. Superawesomeness, Sour Note, Sir Pinch-a-Lot, The Rodent (SpongeBob), The Rodent (Spongebob), Plank-ton, Burger-Beard, Burger Beard, Burger-Beard the Pirate, Burger Beard the Pirate

  • Target of redirect: The SpongeBob Movie: Sponge Out of Water
  • Reason: They are all characters in The SpongeBob Movie: Sponge Out of Water. The first, second, third, fourth, fifth, and seventh ones are the superhero versions of SpongeBob, Patrick, Squidward, Mr. Krabs, Sandy, and Plankton respectively. The fifth one is to distinguish Sandy's superhero form from other characters called the Rodent, and "Spongebob" is an alternative capitalization of "SpongeBob." The eighth one is the main villain of the movie, the tenth one is an alternative name for him (he's a pirate), and the ninth and eleventh ones are the ninth and eleventh ones respectively, both written without the hyphens.
  • Source (if applicable): The SpongeBob Movie: Sponge Out of Water, [22], [23]

174.29.75.144 (talk) 22:51, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Redirect request: Charles Fritz Juengling

This request has been accepted. Please do not modify it.
  • Target of redirect: Fritz Juengling
  • Reason: While Charles Fritz Juengling is the author's full name, he often publishes under just his middle and last: Fritz Juengling.
  • Source (if applicable): Book.[1]

Kbabej (talk) 23:04, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  1. ^ Juengling, Charles Fritz. The Origins of the Southern Hemisphere Accents of English. University of Minnesota. Retrieved 23 January 2015.
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Redirect request: Juengling

This request has been accepted. Please do not modify it.
  • Target of redirect: Jüngling
  • Reason: 'Juengling' is the Anglicization of the German surname Jüngling.
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Kbabej (talk) 23:08, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Redirect request: Fritz Juengling

  • Target of redirect: Charles Juengling
  • Reason: Juengling has published under three names: Charles Fritz Juengling, Charles Juengling and finally Fritz Juengling. He now only publishes under the third, but this redirect will include all names he's used to link to him.
  • Source (if applicable):

Kbabej (talk) 23:19, 23 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment: The proposed title already exists on Wikipedia and target does not. If you meant to create target a redirect to the proposed title, please let us know the same. If a reply is not received within seven days, the request will be declined. Thank you. Anupmehra -Let's talk! 14:08, 24 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

OK, maybe you should switch these articles around. 174.29.75.144 (talk) 14:23, 24 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Redirect request: Soniya Agarwal

This request has been declined. Please do not modify it.
  • Target of redirect: Sonia Agarwal
  • Reason: Indian Actress
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Cinehub24x7 (talk) 02:50, 24 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Declined. The title you suggested seems like an unlikely search term. Could you provide a source showing that it is a commonly used alternate name? Anupmehra -Let's talk! 13:55, 24 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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Redirect request: Ubon Airport + Ubon airport // UBP (IATA code) + VTUU

113.210.137.216 (talk) 02:59, 24 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Redirect request: VTEK

This request has been declined. Please do not modify it.
  • Target of redirect: User:Macfem/VTEK (musician)
  • Reason: The article on VTEK by Macfem had his name attached to the artist name. Instead of having just VTEK as the name it went like this User:Macfem/VTEK (musician),VTEK is one of the fast rising celebrity and deserve to have a stand alone artist page on wiki that can be edited by anyone instead of the article writer including his or her own name to the artist name.
  • Source (if applicable): https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Double_Trouble_(P-Square_album)

Musicbiztalk (talk) 13:41, 24 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Declined. The target is not a Wikipedia article but a userspace sandbox. It appears instead that you are looking to create an article about the subject. See the instructions at WP:AFC on how to submit an article. Please note that the cross namespace redirects are not permitted. Anupmehra -Let's talk! 14:25, 24 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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Redirect request: Dimples (1936 film)

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174.29.75.144 (talk) 14:23, 24 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Redirect created. You can find it at Dimples (1936 film). Thank you for your contribution to Wikipedia! Anupmehra -Let's talk! 14:28, 24 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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movie review

This request has been declined. Please do not modify it.
  • Target of redirect: [[ ]]
  • Reason:
  • Source (if applicable):

Userwriters (talk) 14:47, 24 January 2015 (UTC) WOLF OF WALL STREET REVIEW: COMMENTARY In fact, there is a certain case that I would persuade the audience to go and have a look at. However, this case is not a representation of my views regarding this particular movie. The analysis I chose was the one for the Telegraph’s Review on the film ‘American Hustle’ as it was similar to my formulation of writing this review. I used many language features in this text, which I will now explain.[reply]

I was able to utilize idiomatic expressions in my review such as ‘strattonites’, which only the people who have watched the movies would only understand. My purpose for the use was to ensure that every time people watch this film are eager to know the meaning of the word. I made the introduction to this review quite humorous as I wanted people to be drawn in straight away before I throw facts on them so that they have read too far to stop. I referred to the reader directly in the hope that there would be an attachment to the article itself. ‘You…. The average middle-aged man tied down to three kids still paying off your mortgage and paying back your university even though you graduated 15 years ago.’ This is a perfect example of my utilization of the language style. This allows the reader to wonder what the article has to offer him. Later on in the same paragraph, I used a triadic structure to emphasize the role the main character in the show, Jordan Belfort, by referring to him as ‘the materialistic Messiah, the cock of the walk, the wolf of wall street.’ By doing this, it showed the readers the importance and dominance that the character possesses in the movie. In addition, is to highlight to the reader the use of a triadic structure.

The natural theme of a review Just as the one I used as my style model is pinpointing both good and bad points then highlighting them for the reader to depict them. For example, I told the readers how exhilarating this film is and emphasized this point by saying the film had some exaggerated instances that were at a very high point’. By using alliteration, it shows the reader really how exciting this movie is. When I weighed out the bad points, I compared the movie to other works from Martin Scorsese such as ‘Shutter Island’ and ‘Goodfellas’. I undertook comparisons with the film, Wolf of Wall Street, which was very different from other movies especially where Scorsese a risk in having a completely different approach to this movie.

THE RECKONING: THRILLER SHORT STORY COMMENTARY I have written a Thriller short story about a young boy and his brother running away from a terrorist army camp that has taken over their territory. After reading the Stone Cold novel by Robert Swindell, I decided to write a Thriller short story, whilst also utilizing this particular model as the main style model for my short story. The main purpose, of using this style model, is to entertain readers and draw them into the context of my story. I used many language features in this text, which I will now explain.

There is utilization of the advanced lexis terms in my story such as ‘exasperating’, ‘bewilderment’, and ‘notorious’ as this is a typical feature of any short story, not just a thriller story. This adds great interest to the story since it not only advances the reader's vocabulary but also gives the story a more exciting twist to it. Through a confusing twist, I shifted the introduction into the middle of the story and the middle context at the inception of the narration since through build up suspense and allowing the reader to anticipate anxiously what is going to take place next. Immediately, the advent of activities in the story draws the reader deeply into the context thus creating an exciting feel other than reading continuously and nothing of relevance happening. A recurring theme in this story, like many thrillers, is the utilization of short sentences. For example, ‘Still nothing’, ‘truly amazing’, and ‘Poor Danny’ are part of the examples utilizing short sentences context. My objective, of having short sentences in the story, is to create tension, suspense, and leaving the reader with questions, which will only receive answers by advancing towards the end of the narrative. Moreover, is creating a fast pace in the story thus making it as much of a thriller as possible.

Secondly, is the use of simile in my story in order to create an image in the readers head making him, or her imagine that instance is taking place in real life and being descriptive? For example, “My voice traveled through the forest like a cheetah hunting its prey”. This clearly depicts how quiet and spooky the forest was, and it says a lot about the character. He is so worried about the loss of his little brother such that he pays attention to detail and how his voice sounds in general where he starts to lose faith and is also a feature showing the recurring faith in the story. Through the story, the main character goes from the state of hope to panic, to despair, and to finding the slightest bit of hope possible. Specifically at the end of the film, there is no hope of surviving at the sight of his dead brother. The story comes to a sudden halt after finding his dead brother tore to pieces on the floor and utilizes ellipses to create suspense in order to leave the reader on a cliffhanger. This is a recurring theme in Thriller short stories. I am pleased with how I wrote this story, but wish I wrote more and tried to create more tension and suspense that a typical thriller story has, with more scenes that will shock the reader. I believe that I spent too much time talking about the main character himself rather than writing about more exhilarating scenes.

Comparison between the Reckoning and Wolf of Wall Street Both stories have an exciting feel twist into it. They both represent the realities of life of, not knowing what the next minute holds for you. Leonardo as the lead character in the Wolf of Wall Street is at a point in his life he is just an average earning individual then these changes at some point where he is a millionaire. Another shift occurs again when federal agents start to investigate him and almost loses most his property. This is the same with the thriller story, The Reckoning, concerning a young boy and his brother. The two brothers are roaming around the forest having great hope when they successfully escaped a terrorist army camp. They reach at some point and make a few exchanges before resting to sleep in the hope of achieving their desires as days pass by, only that this hope is squashed when the older wakes up to find his younger brother missing. This turns out into a state of confusion as he tries to call on him, 'Danny! Danny!’ he is disappointed in himself and despairs. However, he still holds to the hope that he will find him but this takes place towards a tragic end since he finds his brother’s body mutilated. The story moves from a hopeful point to a hopeless point then to a point of no return as there is absolutely no hope at all. The language style in both stories has suspense as the audiences are always anticipating the next move. They both have a tragic end. Both stories have similes as they create a certain image into the mind of the reader. In The Reckoning, there is the instance of “My voice travelled…” and Wolf of Wall Street, “Di Caprio throwing dollar bills at a federal officer after trying to bribe him on his yacht.” Both stories convey a message that there is no constancy in the realities of life as events can either change to favor or make worse the way things are than the already are.

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